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04-02-05, 10:50 PM
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...The Truth...
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Young Deuce-"Westcoast Freestyle"
IP: A560 9EC5
links in da sigg
i left feed on Big Chase Song uppin for sum feedbacc on dis bitch
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04-02-05, 10:57 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 9625 6B1B
listening:
beat:really like it lyrics:nice freestyle if it is from what i hear, Voice:maybe i could like it if you could upper the volume Flow:not bad Quality: uper the volume,i can barely hear something could be a lil bit MORE longuer lol,not bad,good drop,keep dropin songs RETURN THE FAVOR: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...612#post2064612 |
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04-03-05, 12:57 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28BD 9D87
How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer 1-10 (10 being the highest) ************************************** Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6 Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 5 Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 6 Energy: (intensity/focus): 6 Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 6 50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:____29*______ ****************************************** Beat selection: pretty decent...I would flow to it = good The Good: I liked your flow and ur voice = pretty good The bad: track is too short/vocals are a notch too low The ugly: **HOL UP...Ur 1st line reminded me of something I've heard before...hmmm...the west coast line...hmmm...not sayin u bit anything, jus familiar to me 4 some reason...iono...nothing else really ugly about this except the fact that it's too short Final Word: This track was decent for what it was. It was too short to fully gauge your flow style/abilities. But, it wasn't bad. Recommendations: Try to work on riding the beat a little better. Your rhyme scheme made your words fall on the beat, but the beat they fell on made it choppy...It's like the difference between clapping on the up-beat (black folk) and the down beat (white folk) = rhythm...work on that...work on making your rhyme scheme more complex...and, up your vocals volume a tad next time. *Final Grade:______C+_______ A = 50-40 B = 39-30 C = 29-20 D = 10-19 F = 0-9 |
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04-03-05, 01:15 AM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 8FEF 3E2B
iight thanx
i apreciate da feed yall uppin dis
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04-03-05, 03:35 AM
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Gone
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IP: 5A56 B73A
Yo Cus The Beat Wass The Only Thing That Wass Ok Have Some Better Punches You Mih Nigga I Aint Gonna Hate On You Juss Tell How Iss Goin Down........
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04-03-05, 03:44 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: D4E8 9B65
return the fucking favor
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04-03-05, 04:59 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 9466 7A91
not really feelin this beat....ya vocals a lil low but i can hear you...this shits iigh for a free...but not much i can really say on it...stay at it
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04-03-05, 05:47 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 1C81 276B
Too short
Aight flow Different ovice...I havent heard much like urs before Try to speak up a little some times you inaudible You fell off the beat a lil with your last words sometimes but its coo
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