this a collabo : blaze (me) ,N chase ..feat jazper
uppin for sum feedback thx


YC: Ayo there's a lot of fake ass bitches that think they runnin shit.
Jaz: Shit, over our dead bodies....
BLAZE: Jus let em come sideways at us, it'll be their dead bodies.

*Three emcees pass a blunt around*

YC: Let's let everyone know what's up...

[Young-Chase]

Now im the artist that spits hardest, don’t want sparks, don’t start it
Devoted, and I would open my chest, to show you where my heart is
With buzz parted, people wanna talk deep then unleash a new beast
Blood in my eyes like I slew your entire crew, few live, when dudes creep
And through lyrics there lurks a spirit, a few teach, and preach a new reach
comedy breached, so why battle with jokes, when you can use true speech
I need streets, and I could be a grocery store, the way I stock sacks
The chronics got me feelin invincible, swear I died and got brought back
Its like I’m fuckin with gods stash, enlightened but not cashed
On my dick? Now stop that, go cop and fucker bring them rocks back
Now attack, with violence these pussies are crying
No denying, you addicted to pain and chase is supplying
To silence these bitches, im smoking pot up in Swishers,
And trippin with ‘Ak’s’ while Bizzy and Pac get to mixin
And similar, im heated and heavy, and if its beef then im ready
A rush when you talk tough, but fuck, your barely holding it steady

Strap ya vests on when some of tha best bless songs/
I jest not you best not step wrong or you'll get my tech drawn/
We wreck cons n expose hoes as we vex pawns/
We'll take out where ya rep spawned n ensure you ain't see tha next dawn/ (x2)

Jaz: Ay Chase lemme get at 'em....

[Jazper]

Fuck these fake faggots frontin facades at us like they wanna combat us/
Shit'll get tragic if ya come at us, leave you punch-drunk like we're sent from Bacchus/
Your dumb passages can't pass this wit structure more advanced than a crystal lattice/
Yall can't fuck wit tha real, we hear ya fear n will make sure your cluck is revealed/
Yall stay duckin tha field, so no need fa me ta be bustin tha steel, I leave it tucked n concealed/
No treaties, believe me, cuz as soon as hands clutch in a deal I know I'm jus touchin my meal/
We ain't lookin fa thread credibility cuz we already shed blessed abilities/
We'll shred flesh until ya bleed, stand n laugh as ya head rests at ya killa's feet/
We rip scripts, stage an attack directed at us n we'll make ya death bed a trilogy/
You gamblin when tha chips are cast, cuz our clips are stacked/
We'll leave a bitch unmasked when we hit a pad wit our Bics uncapped/
Whether it's a spit or scrap we'll leave you split in half wit bitter wrath/

Strap ya vests on when some of tha best bless songs/
I jest not you best not step wrong or you'll get my tech drawn/
We wreck cons n expose hoes as we vex pawns/
We'll take out where ya rep spawned n ensure you ain't see tha next dawn/ (x2)

*BLAZE hits the blunt*

BLAZE: Lemme end this shit real quick...it's like this, I'll...

[BLAZE]

...leave yall niggaz bleeding , screaming for help , shit aint workin , its time for you to leave it
Enjoy the last minutes of breathings … open your eyes cuz im the last muthafucka you B seein … I c your heart stopped beatin , im keeping it trill .. you jus spayed tha cost to be da boss that shit is fo real… there aint gone be a next time to pay up the bill , I told you before stop fuckin up my game , I sliced your throat , now you juss another dead in on my name .. aww fuck blaze getting insane … I already knew the basics .. suspects chosen one y’all ready to face it , turned out to be lyrical subliminal , y’all know this verse turned out to b criminal … watch yo back before I start rippin y’all … now you know wut I mean with real lyricism .. fuck y’all hataz im here now , juss bring out all the criticism… got my own style all ova tha rhyme ... Im a usual suspect .. have I commited a crime … theres no way holdin me down …in this collaboration its young chase n jaz im rollin with now

Strap ya vests on when some of tha best bless songs/
I jest not you best not step wrong or you'll get my tech drawn/
We wreck cons n expose hoes as we vex pawns/
We'll take out where ya rep spawned n ensure you ain't see tha next dawn/ (x2)


YC: Aight fam, that's enough, we jus had to let em know.
BLAZE: Chea pass tha blunt back, we out this bitch.

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links
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2647681
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2647682

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nice.

i like blaze verse. that was pretty dope. pretty hot hook too.

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$HOWTIM3

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Ehh, you had the worst of the verses.. Structure was pretty fucked up.. break it down into bars.. And try to add something different into your verse instead of the same old stupid shit that everyone else does.. Everyone could use a lot of elevating in this piece..

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i'm bored.