Deja Vu ..

Aisle Phive has something to say:

Yeah I'm done rippin herbs, this is where fags get hurt
I mean. . . DAMN! Com is your fuckin best battler!
Full of wack ass elite rejects, and i'm sick of yall
The reason Av n' Leth joined, was cuz they pity yall
Full of newbie frontliners, but realize this before you get slammed
The only exposure Wits End is gettin, is Lady D on webcam
Foldin towels n' washin dishes, that's Hottie's job, what's worse is
We would never stalk you, unless we needed room service
Beatin yall is a hobby, I do it for fun and just to keep sane
But yall ain't just gutter, yall the whole fuckin' bowlin lane!
And yall scared of aisle, bitches gettin' shook on the net
Oh & hottie PLEASE update your roster, everybody good on it left!

Outwrite, Out writing ya'll:

Ive Busted Warlords Before, Banged It In My Sig Too
But From Ruthless To Dez And Hottie? This Crews Thru
Messin With Deja Vu, I Think We Beat You, Im Sure
I Feel Amnesiac Deja Vu, Like Ive Forgottin Yall Before
This Crews So Lame That The Main Thang They Do Is Chat
They About As Wack As T-Ball, With No One To Step Up And Bat
And Dejas Back, Set Trip, Enjoy Your Murking
We Stay Lurking Hoping Youll Talk Mumble And Stay Murmuring
Talkin Shit, Set You Back Stall You Out Quick
She Must Be Transexual The Way They Ride Hotties Dick

Feeble .. Mind over matter, bitches:

& hottie the fact is, your wackness, means you could be next,
but its worse yu bin sun'd does audio when he aint understood in text ..
ya rosters pathetic. leaders always on my dick but now im staining my lover,
& whats it say for ya "dope heads" when 1 sides the same as the other !?
washed up roster, i'll leave all of ya'll ripped like hell,
& you praise com? he has the worst record in the entire triple L ..
this is an open mic diss.. not the real thing, ya stats aint worth it,
but the fact is, its still better than your battle verses ..

Walter Wall: the name is dope enough ..

Wits end is over! but I'm beyond simple wordplay, fuck it
A crew full of angry janitors...constantly kicking the bucket
Fact: You're all wack bunch of useless kids, led by an e-whore
Need'n more elevation than elevators stuck on the ground floor
Im dope, ure not, ya always rid'n my nuts and speak'n my name
LMAO, Wit's End collab and diss at them are one and the same
I'll use penskills, slaughtering this crysis COMpletely through
Hid'n behind ure bars!.....Proof: Dimense chose jail over you!
Leth left, along with everyone else who was dope, wack fostered
Originally Posted by Lethargic
Where's this big diss at? hmmmmm

.........check your roster

Praise it. Now.

Good job at not dissing the actual name of the crew...

...cause I named that shit

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^word, I came up with the "Remember Warlords?......Neither Do We" Slogan

so I didn't diss that either

lol, very nicely done.

You all came with some very hard punchs, but the roster thing did get a little old and played.
All of you used the same structure which made it that much easier to read, all flowed very well. I could sense the animosity towards wits end through out the whole read.
Also, the comic value of this was stellar. I laughed out loud a good 4-5 times. The web cam thing with aisle 5 was great, the hard personals from out write, also hard personals from feeble, walter finished with that great ending. An exceptional diss. Well done, guys. You managed to hit all of wits ends VIP's within about 20 bars. This is due much applause.

If you could please, please, return the favor with some honest feedback on my piece, The Soldiers Creed, in my sig. I would appreciate it very much, it is being horribly slept on. And I tried out a new style, and I would really like to know what people think about it.

not bad not bad..enjoeyd walters verse a little better than the others
but overall not bad.

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nice diss...every1 had dope punches...and good wordplay....structures were okay flowed pretty well....personals were hittin hard....overall some very good dissing..
fav lines:
aisle:
Beatin yall is a hobby, I do it for fun and just to keep sane
But yall ain't just gutter, yall the whole fuckin' bowlin lane!
And yall scared of aisle, bitches gettin' shook on the net
Oh & hottie PLEASE update your roster, everybody good on it left!
outwrite
Messin With Deja Vu, I Think We Beat You, Im Sure
I Feel Amnesiac Deja Vu, Like Ive Forgottin Yall Before
Talkin Shit, Set You Back Stall You Out Quick
She Must Be Transexual The Way They Ride Hotties Dick
feeble
washed up roster, i'll leave all of ya'll ripped like hell,
& you praise com? he has the worst record in the entire triple L ..
this is an open mic diss.. not the real thing, ya stats aint worth it,
but the fact is, its still better than your battle verses ..
walter
I'll use penskills, slaughtering this crysis COMpletely through
Hid'n behind ure bars!.....Proof: Dimense chose jail over you!
Leth left, along with everyone else who was dope, wack fostered
Originally Posted by Lethargic
Where's this big diss at? hmmmmm

.........check your roster


nice diss fellas worth the read

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enjoyed feebles verse the most, all went very well
the last verse play on the names didnt come off too well

blah blah blah
word
check my nas remix

..I used to be in WIT's End.Overall, this was decent.I liked Walter's verse the most and I liked Aisle's verse the least.In second place was Feeble and in 3rd was Outwrite.Im surprised I read it all.Usually when 4 people collab it be long as hell.You all did a good job with the amount of lines. Peace.

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If you were active you would get some of aisle's funny lines and personals.
upping for more feedback .

i actually thought it was weak....a couple of good wordplay in there from
some cats..but all in all...i didn't enjoy it

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^LoL, you never like anything you aren't in.

Anyway, decent diss. I was expecting much more, but nonetheless, it still wasn't bad by any means. I agree with the masses...Walter's verse was my fav.

13th, a diss doesn't need wordplay. It's the personal.s that count, some people don't get all the personals.

Foldin towels n' washin dishes, that's Hottie's job, what's worse is
We would never stalk you, unless we needed room service

Hottie works at a hotel, her location says :Why so you can come stalk me?

Blah, lol. I wasn't going to use dope lines in a diss, all personals, that's what it's about.

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Hmmm~~~I use to be Wits End..anyway..this was a nice diss...I would've liked to have seen more personals...although I did write a diss on Deja Vu(when I was still with Wits End) I don't think it will come in handy now...or will it??????

Nice and tight...

Several quotables.

Kinda thought ya'll took it easy on em...

But it's all good.

Peace

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