hd won this bitch im sorry 29's verse was fucking amature

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Voted For: twenty9

Vote twenty9

This werent a strong battle but someone has to win. No wordplay, multis werent that great. Overall twenty9 JUST came out with a better verse with flow which won it for him.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: twenty9

h.d sayin i spit garbage, he must b high or not no the definition,
im gonna win, this is the truth, not a mutha fuckin premonition/
aight
ya got ya fictional rappa called contam-ination
you’se a bitch, its known throughout the nation/
ok
don’t battle me bitch, u’ll be leavein in a hearse,
u only won a battle, cuz flow couldn’t drop a verse/
decent personal, aight ending

focus more, stop with the basic flow, get more creative i cant tell you no more



29 times the amount of character used in every on of ya rhymes is the odds of you winning
You’d do better surviving a dinner date with Hanibal Lector, tied down on a stretcher
set up dont rhyme with the follow up, but aight punch

Locked in the kitchen, you could up chuck ya deserts, than me? You’ll never spit sicker
Ya style causes laughter, I’ll shatter ya bladder through ya hip bone and leave ya ass pissed
dont rhyme, could of been a good punch 2 danm..
Your punches wouldn’t have impact if had two brass fists, with meteors crammed in em
You could claim to be divine 29 times, I’ll watch 29 signs of God damning em
wasnt feeling the ending...

you had a chance to really win this battle EZ, but now that i read your verse you wasnt focus as i thought you was, bars wasnt rhyming, you toss in a quick punch with a messed up set up, FOCUS MORE, RHYME YOUR PUNCHES WITH THE SET UP LINES, and you will be better

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NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!!!

thanx, uppin for more votes............................................. .................................

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March 26 1995, we remember

This is why I started dropping explanations with every rhyme word in em... acuse yall really do just look at the last couple of words per line... Ther is no rule in hip~hop that you have to rhyme there... rhyming is the name of the name... not where you rhyme... and brass fists and ass pissed rhymes... say it out loud...

*smh*

You're a multi styled emcee you should know this better than most

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wanna hear sumthin funny h.d.? if all the votes that were dq'd counted, i'd be winning 4-3

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March 26 1995, we remember

MY VOTE GOT REMOVED???? WTF.

Oh and H.D you n your 5 battles?? that are apparently up, you only won 1!

ppl look at his record.

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^ said from a guy with 13 L's ............ hell up

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atleast motherfucker i dont float around on the forums sayin iv got so many FAKE ASS awards

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uppin for some votes, and please explain them, we have too many dq'd votes.

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March 26 1995, we remember

Voted For: H.D.

damn you got this battle on lock ,better flow, better punches,better vocab

tw- i like the way you drop but it was to basic

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873


first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873


first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap

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^^^^^^^^^^^^my bad heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216873


first off all rtf on these battle I need these closed asap

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