10-15lines
spit 20mins afta check in
no hate/crew/dr votes
reasons wit eryvote

iight you ready?

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iight jus spit it when you dun...dun worry bout who go first

U ignorin Than Go To Sleep Bitch, I'm hold more shellz Than Seashorez//
What i need to Creep For?, Just Release Four at This Whorez//
I Scare Setz, Cuz I hold bitchez down like Hair Netz//
Whorez Cannot Beat Us, Me Myself N I, Leavin u Porportioned Like Fetus//
Cut Up, 3 Stripez on ya Chest like u Endorsed By ADIDAS//
My Force iz my Heataz, u copied my game, and shit u Stenciled It//
But when this 9 Bang, You filled wit more led than Pencil Tips//
That’z tha End of Diz, Make sho u duck down when It Get Dark//
When my Tecs Spark, I hit Tha Spot like I’m Shootin out Checkmarks// (I'm on Point)
Cuz Endless Killin fillin this Pretensious Villian//
Aint no way to Go back, this Zig Zag N Weed won’t End This Fillin//
Step Up, see how Fast You will, spill out tah the ill//
Clear Sticky shit Up Like my Guns filled wit Vagisil//

jus make sure dat you within 20mins...iight

yo man you gonna spit some shit or what??? dun be a bitch an duck out

yo you fucking ducked
man your a pussy
next time you challenge someone
make sure you gonna battle them and not waste their time
and lyrical knowledge on your weak ass

MAD add cuts to hand, like stickin ya fingers in a metal fan...
lost Structure man, ya shits all over the place like dust n sand//
An i have no time or patience for wackness, so im smackin this phony...
Till he lie flat on his back, down for the count like draculas homies //
cuz Like sex, My text A-pills, but yours just Lacks the Skills...
Im hard to kill, got you jumpin in holes like Iraqie fields//
ya Punches so old you hittin nothin but dust like Holly Filed..
retire you must, cuz ya text loosin heat faster than oatmeal//
and gettin a load shot in ya mouth is the only time your full of Illness...
if we fought, and you heat seek ya punches, youd probably still miss//

my bad it took me a lil over 20mins.. damn lol im not just tryin ta spit anything.. anyways.. there you go.. votes..

UPPIN FOR VOTES gots some shit tah do so neone who here state your claim

mad took this one...his punches were more creative and his flow was better...skandalz, shit wasn't bad, decent punches but your flow is way off....just need to get better structure to bring your verses together better

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