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yo drop tha same verse you dropped in tha last battle somthin went wrong when i tried 2 post my verse, it said error or sumthin and when i went 2 proceed so i could try and post again it said u automatically won or sumthin i already pmed strobe about it, anyway jus drop same verse as last one

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Check in by: 08-28-05 at 03:13 AM

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ThatNigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 02:46 AM.

Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down
Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town*

This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle
Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle**

Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this
How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?***

I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done
its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one......

Proof

*http://community.rapverse.com/showt...692#post2399692

**http://community.rapverse.com/showt...754#post2136754

***http://community.rapverse.com/showt...951#post2192951

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Cdusit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 02:48 AM.

Quick key due to me not having the verse I wrote before.

check it...

echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit
You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit
Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread
your spitting dead science like physist found dead
Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure
Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure
at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga"
your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure
Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's
............................after I get sinister and finish ya.
youll have no direction in life like toubled teens

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Voted For: Cdusit

open:c
finish:c
flow:tie
punches:c
personals:nigga
vocab:none
multies:none
overall Vote: cdusit

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Krooked VS Fame

Krooked VS InfiniteStan

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Battles:

Krooked VS Fame

Krooked VS InfiniteStan

My Soundclick

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Voted For: Cdusit

THAT NIGGA
Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down
Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town*
^poor opener not a good diss 1/10^
This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle
Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle**
^weak....2/10^
Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this
How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?***
^weak personal 4/10^
I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done
its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one......
^no......0/10^

CDUSIT

echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit
You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit
^ok opener nothing special...3/10^
Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread
your spitting dead science like physist found dead
^good wordplay...nice diss 5/10^
Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure
Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure
^kinda weak but good wordplay 4/10^
at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga"
your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure
^straight to the point diss 5/10^
Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's
............................after I get sinister and finish ya.
youll have no direction in life like toubled teens
^good closer...way to end it 7/10^

overall:That niggas verse was filled with weak punches and personals that didnt appeal to me nor effect his opponent.....his rhyme scheme was extremely basic and nothing to brag about....
cdusit was a quick keystlye but had a couple punches in there that hit hard and appealed to me and effected his opponent..

v/cdusit

rtf on my battles please

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