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Old 03-29-04, 10:49 AM   #1
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service vs. the truth

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: poverty,executive,enhance,international
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Old 03-31-04, 01:23 AM   #2
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just a lil somethin showin u can flip these words


i got some clips that'll shock you but they ain't from a movie scene/only fuck wit bad bitches similar to a beauty queen/elude the scene/cuz when i pull heat it's a robbery/take everything u own, leave u in a state of POVERTY/now u watchin me, i ENHANCED in a better way of living/everybody eaten treat everyday like thanksgiving/and i'ma cook the beef on this ranch/cuz i make laws get passed like the EXECUTIVE branch/i know i'ma catch but the truth is u can't catch me/INTERNATIONLLY known I got people all in my F-A-C-E
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Old 03-31-04, 07:53 PM   #3
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yo im in
 
Old 03-31-04, 08:08 PM   #4
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Once again another net gee who shoots the clips
THE TRUTH, THE TRUTH is your fucking shit
I'm battlin this kid, service an executive
only thing your good at is losing consectutive
your so wack, I dont even have to try to beat you
was going to get on your level but ill just dickslap you
Service need to spit atleast thirty two
get on tips and im still about to murder you
its curtains duke, you better enhance your talents
but youve already fell off worse than gymnists with bad balance
I got mad talent kid, you could never stick it to me
The truth is a false im the sick one truly
broke pennyless bitch, what am i supposed to do
most rappers made it out of poverty but poverty came down on you
about to floor this duke, he doesnt stand a chance at winnin
ben afflack wishes he was me,he wouldnt have to cheat vs this women
im about to say international, but i think i said it in this bar
you suck at this shit , your not going far

wow kid you suck penis
 
Old 04-01-04, 06:25 PM   #5
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fucking vote
 
Old 04-01-04, 10:39 PM   #6
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cool you guys followed the rules i'm voting

breakdown for the truth:

flow:good job using the words and keeping an alright flow 7/10

volcab:solid use through out it not overly complex but good 6/10

punches:not much here but best line," i ENHANCED in a better way of living/everybody eaten treat everyday like thanksgiving/" alright considering the words you had to use 6/10

overall:19/30 good verse

breakdown for service:

flow:nice nothing special though 7/10

volcab:good use hear better then your oppenent some of the best in the league so far that i've read 8/10

punches:best line,"but youve already fell off worse than gymnists with bad balance" you threw more of them and they hurt 8/10

overall:23/30 nice punches and mechanics a well rounded verse

vote--service ran away with this and his punches
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Old 04-02-04, 07:03 AM   #7
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Old 04-02-04, 07:53 AM   #8
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there fixed my vote it was too late i guess
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Old 04-02-04, 04:37 PM   #9
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iight...

The Truth had the flow on point...not really a battle verse tho it was more a freestyle just braggin bout himself...nothin really connectin wit service

Service...seemed like he had disses to himself in there...im battlin this kid service an executive, and service need to spit at least thirty two...i dont knwo maybe im just readin it wrong...flow was pretty good

due to the lack of bars in truths verse and because he really didnt have any disses in it i gotta give it to service...better punches...flow i give all to truth tho

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Old 04-02-04, 10:07 PM   #10
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The truth had a tight verse but i agree with everyone else it was not a battle verse, there was no punches, or personal but good flow.

Service had a solid verse decent punches, no real personals, good flow, and ok vocab
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Old 04-05-04, 12:23 AM   #11
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I'm gonna have to give this one to Service. First of all truth came in paragraph form and then it didnt even sound like he was battlin. it sounded like an open mic. absolutely no punches thrown, vote goes to Service for his punches
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Old 04-05-04, 08:36 AM   #12
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4-0 service wins
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