deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

checkin in,

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

checkin in

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Stretch u out like taffy...and watch u break/
My flows is a calligraphy... beatiful dont try and take/
I spit like daffy... only absorb so much, like a sponge, then your done and I aint talkin bout crabby patties/
It's a war goin on, if I cant say my flows legal then its a contraband/
Me and the Chryme Syndicate do guerilla warfares/
U cant stop me when im on fire unless u smoky the bear/
Ill have u in ya van goin, talkin bout u aint scared/
Run u over with a H2, forget about the O, I came here for what I need to do/
Thats turn ya body in to bloody water/
Raisin the prices so when I get charged for slaughter, that one phone call wont be to ya mama so I wont have to call her/
Double-digit inflation/
Messin ya familys death rate up, Im glad we have no relation/
Somethins gonna be tickin when these two black hands hit ya, and I aint talkin bout a rolex/
Im killin u wit this poetry I guess ill call it a sonnet/

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Oh shit im battlin the tin man rapper, cuz hes got no fuckin heart/ Claimin your the "Lock", but i "Pick" kids like you apart/
Or maybe your the scarecrow rapper cuz battlin me just aint that smart/
Your barely register on the radar, while my lyrics are off the chart/
Superhero on the mic, takin lyrics to the chest/
I'lll have you spitten thru the wire like your name was Kanye West/
How you gonna battle me when you got like "60" posts/
Man i cant even see ya, you should change your name to ghost/
Every rookie that I battle, i try to leave them with a lesson/
Lock, rappin aint your thang you should try a new profession/
Cuz its Vango vs Casper aka new kid on the block/
put your money on Vango cuz i got this battle "Locked"

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

upping over the no shows i'll come back to vote later

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

fell down a bit uppin again

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

No doubt, Vango got this one. Man.. this is the shit I thought you would bring against Restricted, punch wise (though some other stuff was more on in that battle, I think). Check it:

"Oh shit im battlin the tin man rapper, cuz hes got no fuckin heart/
Claimin your the "Lock", but i "Pick" kids like you apart/
Or maybe your the scarecrow rapper cuz battlin me just aint that smart/
Your barely register on the radar, while my lyrics are off the chart/"

^^ killer bars, great flow, two good punches, only wish you had a bit more multis, but still tight. Lock just had nothing to compare.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

breakdown for lock:

flow:i thought it was a strong flow probably the best part of your verse some multis and shit good job 8/10

volcab:alright nothing special though 6/10

punches:not much this is where your verse really lacked best line was your opener,"
Stretch u out like taffy...and watch u break/" try harder next week 5/10

overall:19/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for vango:

flow:flowed well nothing amzing though 6/10

volcab:good use again nothing great though 6/10

punches:nice punches you difenatly out punched your oppenent but that wasn't too hard to do, my fav,"Oh shit im battlin the tin man rapper, cuz hes got no fuckin heart/ Claimin your the "Lock", but i "Pick" kids like you apart/" overall 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--vango, close battle but the punches took it for vango

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Aight Check It..

Vango Took This Battle Hands Down...I Mean This Kid Had No Competition Towards Him. Vangos Punches, Metaphors, and Flow Was Just Better.

Lock Please Elevate!!

Vote - Vango

~R~