your bars are old like alkatraz cells
this shit don't fiz me like flat pop


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that is a played old style, every single metaphore has been done somewhere at sometime, and thats all you seem to write, it doesn't get props now adays in punchline battles, chino xl is even fallen off...... you really have to understand that.

and we all see your multis but that doesn't change the fact that your lines are too long, you can still use multis,


you aint golden, ya not payed, You throw trash around like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz you can't fight back like you got Aids


its the exact same line you wrote but it flows better and comes across easier and I still used the multis......this is something you can easily fix yourself but you refuse to take anyones advice.....no one beefs with you dude.

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But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

Murdah...

You bitch and moan with every feed i gave you, and thats swayin 2 weeks in a row, Civil, check that out..


Dude just fuckin read what I say and take it or leave it...dont fuckin be a bitch about it man...whateva though im just sayin

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They offer no relief...

'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!
alright shoulda bin more personal


I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
decent but played

stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids......
wasent feelin this

Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!
haha ok but shoulda bin a personal

for the two better punches

vote snocap

Vote: sno


hated the aids line jus bla...