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Old 03-22-04, 01:10 PM   #1
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restricted vs. krackmittens

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.
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Old 03-22-04, 04:04 PM   #2
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Aiyo...Lets Get This Started..

.::Checkity Check::.

Good Luck KrackMittens

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Old 03-22-04, 04:19 PM   #3
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lol you know this is kinda funny cause me and re$tricted just talked baout us haveing to battle each other but its all good mad love

check check checkity check

good luck re$tricted

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Old 03-25-04, 09:40 AM   #4
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well i guess this is round two show up

uppin over closed battles
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Old 03-25-04, 10:20 AM   #5
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your closing this?? im lost today is thursday right??

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Old 03-25-04, 03:51 PM   #6
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Aight..This Can't Be Closed, The Rules Said Verses Due Today...So Here Is My Ish..

Aight Check Mic...

Yo No Disrespect Just Business..

3.....2....1....Yo....

I'll Rip Your Brain Stem Outta Skull, and Watch The Blood Rush From Your Nose,
Insert A Needle And Suck Out Ya Cerebral Spinal Fluid, Unbalanced Rythmatic Flows/
Insert Two Tampax, Chemical Formulas Burn Like Anthrax, Disolving Ya Tissue,
Pull Out Da Cerebellum, How You Gone Spit and Think?, Battlings Gonna Be An Issue/
Pick Apart Ya Cerebrum With The Mic, Ya Nerves Flipping Like Gymnastics,
You Have No Gull Anyways, Not Like You'll Be Missing Anything Fantastic/
Pull Apart Your Corpus Callosum, I'm Really Splitting This Kids Dome,
No Throne, You Ain't Winning, But You Can Have Back Your Back-Bone/
Since You Lack Chrome, O-Somes, Brain Waves Invisible Like The O-Zone,
Flip Your Flow, ILL-Matic Ya Prone, See Me On Da Scene and Be Like "Oh No!"/
Enough Of The Anatomy, I'ma Just Rip You Bitch, Word Play I've Already Won,
You Spit Wit Ice, I Keep It Nice, Described Like GWS Patients I'm As Hot As It Cums/
With Lyrical Typhoons, And Enough Carosene In My Spits To Ignite You,
Spiritualy Fight You, Twist Ya Neck Backwards, You Ready For Round 2?/
If Anyone Votes For This Cat, Then We Must Be At A Gay Convention,
Spit Metaphors Wrapped Within Each Other, Spittin Lyrical Deception/
I'ma Verbal Mastermind, Crack Ya Back Over My Knee, Break'N Ya Spine,
Insights Are Blind, Acidic Spits Melting Your Inner-Core Decline/
Don't Fuck Wit Da Lines, I Spit Bars To The Extent Of Your Neck,
My Upper-Cuts Leave'N Your Upper-Lip Over-Your Head, Bitch Come In Check/
Your Bars Ain't Made Outta Concrete, Their Made Outta Plastic,
I Bend Em and Extort Them, Making Your Spit An Instant Classic/

Haha..Yea..Round 1...Who's Next??

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Old 03-25-04, 03:58 PM   #7
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Old 03-25-04, 05:47 PM   #8
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hey yo i didnt want this battle but its whatever this is just a quick key cause everyone keeps bitching for me to post im sorry fellas i have a job..lol Re$rticted have another win..lol and give me my sig already!!

R-rated shit your eyes must be dialated
grab the mic shove it up your ass leave you violated//
try and fade it leave you like a nuclear theisis covering a dead fetus
piss lyrics out my penis just to let you know you not da meanest//
you not an emcee or a textcee you a femcee spitting flowery rhymes
i chop and cut your spitt like coke straight powedry lines//
move in milatary formations gett your mind racing and pacing
think you a rapper cause you know em's part on "patenily waiting"//
im not 50 so i aint holding you down im here to smack you off your throne
and shatter your crown leave you like Village pimp straight bitch//
man i've had dis itch to get at you got 4,000 verbs aimed at your face
let loose leave you breathless wit ink all over the place//
maybe it was a mistake for me to step up in this battle??
but you da one thinking you make gallaxies rattle//
naw you just run in tattle name one win you had and it was a decent battle??
oh yeah the one wit TooN but you jumped 2 soon went and bitched at the mods
got him suspenede cause he brought it to you real hard and split traysix like pea pods//
but its all good we all hood undestructable emcees up to no good
run these rap boards and pimp scores of whores fuck dis battle
i didnt want it in the first place im just here to take over and run this place
Re$triced you could have this win we kin i dont feel like rapping dis the end!!

yo i didnt want to battle i gotta alot going on so whatever my vote is for Re$tricted..lmao

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Old 03-25-04, 05:51 PM   #9
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omg wtf i didnt know you had throne in your shit my bad pimpin

sorry didnt mean to freepost

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Old 03-25-04, 07:14 PM   #10
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Re$TricTed 8/10 good shit
solid flow all the way through,good use of metaphores,punchlines and lyrics.No flaws.

Krackmittens 5/10 o.k.
I was feelin yo verse in the begining then you slowly died out. You had great
metaphores,and punch lines but lost focus,.



my vote goes to Re$Tricted.
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Old 03-25-04, 08:58 PM   #11
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Yo i was feelin ur verse resstricted it had some good flow and everything, just what i expected from a vet. 6/10

Krack the first line was the hat shit fool, i was feelin this rap too. But unlike restricted, kracks rap was my style. CLOSE 7/10
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Old 03-25-04, 09:03 PM   #12
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no i wasn't closing it just uppin it over all of the closed threads. anyway here's my vote:

breakdown for restricted:

flow:slick nice mutlis at the start solid through out the whole peice 7/10

volcab:amazing!!! the best i've seen in the league so far. my god are you an anglish major in university or something?? shit 10/10

punches:really violent at the start and some good personals through out the rest of it like,"If Anyone Votes For This Cat, Then We Must Be At A Gay Convention," pretty funny 7/10

overall:24/30 great one of the best verses i've read since coming back to this site

breakdown for krackmittens:

flow:just not on level with your oppenent good none the less except those last few bars really got out of hand 6/10

volcab:good use still though no hating but a level below your oppenent 6/10

punches:solid here though nice personals through the whole peice my fav. "you not an emcee or a textcee you a femcee spitting flowery rhymes" 8/10

overall:20/30 solid verse against anyone else me included probably could of taken the win but not good enough this week

vote--restricted came to fight this week he gets my vote. one of if not the best verse this week. krackmittens did good just not on the same level the time.
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Old 03-26-04, 06:22 AM   #13
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Aight Nice...

Re$tricted: 2 KRackMittens: 1

Uppin Dis Ish...

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Old 03-26-04, 10:41 AM   #14
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good battle......some good punches from restrictedand personals...overall 7/10
Krackmittens ...did ok but i just wasnt feelin it man...overall 4/10
pz out...kepp it up...good abttle
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Old 03-26-04, 11:00 AM   #15
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uppin this gay battle

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