deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Once again, Just checkin in early...........

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checkin in

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I don't know if I'll have any time to do this later so here is a quick 8 bars.......

I call this Murder Internal.........

This cat Wrote Flows tryin to Throw Blows at me like some Broke Hoes//
But the only Lock we seein is on this battle thread when he No Shows//
Dude Ya Suck and people stay sleepin on you like they Snoozed The Clock//
Lil Jon ain't make your Top Ten?...... must be lots of Room For Lock//
Tray Six Dick Suckin, you musta thought I'd Forget Something//
But like Toon told your bitchass, Lock...why you ain't spit nothin?//
We share the Same State, leave him fucked anyway like Date Rape//
And the next time he'll see Erie is at the bottom of a Great Lake//
You're a Fairy Feen, and your mom's fat ass is Scaring Me//
She saw you get DQed and all she thought of was Dairy Queen//
You're Tryin Your Fate, wantin to fuck me over like he's Dyin Ta Get Laid//
I drop a lot for Crhyme Sindicate, this cat just Crhyme Sin-Dick-Ate//
This dude has Got Flaws, I’ll Pop Four and won’t Stop til you Drop Dawg//
This win is Not Yours, can’t even spit, must got Lock Jaw//
You're Soft Spoken, them gay ass words you spit got Caught Chokin//
Get Popped Smokin, oh I almost forgot, yo this Lock's Broken//

~no hate~
CRHYME SINDICATE!!!!

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The lead meets the paper/
They say its a seduction so I guess you can call me a raper/
Its takes me 5 minutes to kill you like instant rice and I aint no raider/
Ill leave you in the dirt tellin you to Ketchup like heinz.....see ya later/
Its not the pencil or the 5.0 lead....dummy its me/
Pencils dont make man, man makes pencils from a tree/
You tried to hit me wit ya combinations but this lock needs a key/
Betta flow ya best cause the do's aint behind the re/
trespassers get prosecuted/
you steppin over the boundary line stupid/
I love tearin you apart....I THINK I GOT SHOT BY CUPID/
You probably askin ya self why....sucka you intruded/
You gonna be fallen to the ground and I aint talkin bout a trip/
Im chokin you, you breathin all hard, suffering from a wick/
scriptures a kill you, pens is to messy, thats why I write with a BIC/

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[QUOTE=DirtBoy69]deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
[B]bar limits:[/
nigga shut cha bitch ass up and holla at tha boy p-[90

props for getting your verses up so fast

breakdown for enygma:

flow:good use of multis to tighten up the flow good job 7/10

volcab:nice use here above average 7/10

punches:good personals and the amount of punches was high too my fav,"She saw you get DQed and all she thought of was Dairy Queen//" funny shit 8/10

overall:well rounded verse the punches were the high spot 22/30

breakdown for lock:

flow:the lines were all over in size and there wasn't no multis or shit to help the flow this was really choppy 4/10

volcabretty average nothing special but it wasn't bad 5/10

punches:most of your lines were kinda weak and with played topics your best line,"Ill leave you in the dirt tellin you to Ketchup like heinz.....see ya later/" overall i'd give 6/10

overall:15/30 pretty basic not enough to beat enygma

vote--enygma gets it better structure and punches is what it boils down to

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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I'd Say dis was very close battle...both came hard....perhaps harder than i expected...Lock your punches hit but some a bit plyed.....flow was ok....structure needs oilin'....vocab was nice...wordplay cld be beter......overall....5/10...keep it up..

enygma ....Ur punches hit hard...ur flow was nice though out the first line but kinda got basic afta dat...your stucture was ok....try to keep the same amount of slybols in each line.....your vocab was nice and wordplay was better than lock...overall ...7/10..

Overall...Both were ko..but i felt Enygma came a silght bit harder with his punches....but lock your verse was ok...purhaps not enough in the way of personals to win dis battle....

v/enygma

Pz out...good battle peeps...keep it up...

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yo i jus' think that enygma has the better rap and alittle more flow
v/ enygma

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so what chicks can rap too/
u won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Check Dis..

Enygma: 7/10
I Liked Your Personals and Punches. Definilty Felt and That Shit Was Hot. Flow Was There Too...All Around Nice Verse. Metaphors and Mulits Were Nice.

Lock: 5/10
Punches Weren't As Nice and Your Structure Was Bad. Flow Wasn't As Good and Mulits and Metaphors Couldn't Even Match Enygma's. Just Elevate.

Vote - Enygma

~R~

uppin over the no shows

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Uppin for some more feedback.............

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