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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

check in good luck..

check ---> mate on next move.

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I'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!

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decent ^^ ( trying to shorten my bars )

I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids.......

MurDah....

Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!

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I'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!


this was ok, nothing outstanding. And there is no personal here, just because you put his name in the sentence, it doesn't make it a personal.

I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
This is played, you worded it well and was kinda of funny. but the Horoscope sign shit, yeah, thats played to hell.

stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids......
This was retarded, becuase he doens't have AID's. There was no nameplay. you had multi's, but this was a horrible bar for a 1-2 battle. Sorry man.

Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!
lol, i thought this was pretty funny. but again, there is not personal. Like, i'm getting tired of just seeing people throw generic non-personal lines.

my vote goes to snocap

both of you guys need to work on adding personals to your bars. The generic shit makes you look horrible.

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This is a pretty close one.

Sno, You had some pretty good multis. Good wordplay, You had better structure as well. I liked your first bar better than your second bar though. Average drop.

Murdah, I like that your working on your structure some, it just makes shit easier to read. Your first bar was pretty nice, wasn't really feeling your second bar though. Overall a decent drop.

I would love to see you both use more personals in your battles. You are both pretty creative, but try to use some of that creativeness into personals.

I'd say Snocap got this by a hair, but it was pretty close.

V/ Snocap

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I'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!
I dont know the basic metaphors don't hit anymore


I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
this was ok, basic and worded bad though
stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids.......
Even with the ryming through out it, its still stretched, it's a huge bar could pretty much go as two, and again the basic metaphors don't hit and have all been done somewhere at sometime, thats your biggest proplem, get more creative give the metophores a rest..


Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!
this was ok concept anyway......


Ima give it to snow cap, murdur you still have to fix your structure, the first bar was better though, and get more creative with your punches, nothing you throw really hits at all.........

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This was a descent battle. SnoCaP had better wording and flow, while MurDah187 used similies in each of his bars. Unless the similies is outstanding, I usually dont like to see too many of them cause they really dont make a punch hit hard.


Vote - SnoCap

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I'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!
SnoCap-
This was the most decent one in the battle though, but it coulda been better then just abortion and dont use exclamation, it looks kinda childish..

Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!
not really feelin it, it wasnt much of a punch, kinda of a statement, again..the exclamations

Murder-

I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
good attempt, but it didnt hit hard, good structure though

stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids.......
not good structure and extremley strectched, shorten it and try to get your point across with fewer words, do both at the same time, other than that, it was mediocure at best

This battle was nothin special, but i felt as though snocap took this by a very tiny margin, because of his first punch, but both of you guys keep on workin, im just learnin too

Vote- Snocap

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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief...

i never knew that geting cut short befor u made big like aborted baby wasnt played do ya nigga pick and chose which punch ya concider played??? because it is played as hell......

ya cant exsecpt my multi flow cuz ya think its streched??? this site is lame...

and cant fight back like u got aids thought everyone knew people who got aids die and dont really have a chance at fight it but whatever im done with this site...