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Old 03-09-09, 12:25 PM   #1
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Week 8: one way 5-2 .vs LP 4-2

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Monday Morning: Battles are set up
Wednesday: LP 1 bar
Thursday: one way 2 bars
Friday: LP 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Night Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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Old 03-09-09, 12:33 PM   #2
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Old 03-09-09, 08:31 PM   #3
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Old 03-10-09, 09:37 PM   #4
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this hardcore artist claims he served hard time in incarceration
but the only bid he ever completed, was in an ebay auction
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Old 03-10-09, 09:55 PM   #5
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you target audience is non existent & your aim is a little wild
you'd have me in your cross-hairs, if you groomed it once in a while
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Old 03-10-09, 10:18 PM   #6
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Its true you can get anything on Ebay if you have time to go through
but why take the days to auction and bid when two lines can own you
Your full of lies, if you got a click then they must be theiving hood rats
Your called the best crew but I dont know anything your even good at
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Old 03-10-09, 10:51 PM   #7
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Honestly, wasn't feeling either one of LP's lines.
The concept and delivery was just weak man.

However, One way's first line was funny, and the second one was ok at best.

Nonetheless, one way wins this.

Vote - One Way
 
Old 03-10-09, 11:27 PM   #8
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this hardcore artist claims he served hard time in incarceration
but the only bid he ever completed, was in an ebay auction
ok..

you target audience is non existent & your aim is a little wild
you'd have me in your cross-hairs, if you groomed it once in a while
nah man not feeling this...

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Its true you can get anything on Ebay if you have time to go through
but why take the days to auction and bid when two lines can own you
LMFAO HAHA GOOD FLIP...

Your full of lies, if you got a click then they must be theiving hood rats
Your called the best crew but I dont know anything your even good at
eeh nah man not feeling this...


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for the best punch that connected...
 
Old 03-11-09, 02:56 PM   #9
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I wasn't really feelin L.P.s second line I didnt really get the cross hairs and shit, but the first one was ok I got your concept and everthing

One your Ebay flip was pretty creative and funny, contradicing L.P.'s first punch but your second line was pretty good with the sig and everything, but not one of your best ones

anyways Vote-One way because of his first punch
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Lp's Ebay line, was extremely played. And i get the hair n combin thing, but that connection to a battle was pretty lame.

One Way's flip on the Ebay shit was ok, didn't hit that well, but was ok. N his second punch was blah

One way took this, but only becasue LP shot himself in the foot.
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Old 03-12-09, 01:44 PM   #11
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this hardcore artist claims he served hard time in incarceration
but the only bid he ever completed, was in an ebay auction
okay, decent concept but i already had a line like this and it connected way better.so i guess that means this is played.

you target audience is non existent & your aim is a little wild
you'd have me in your cross-hairs, if you groomed it once in a while
once again, decent concept but the connection was off and the delivery wasn't there...you got a lot of potential but a little rewording can do wonders for you

Its true you can get anything on Ebay if you have time to go through
but why take the days to auction and bid when two lines can own you
coo flip, the punch doesn't hit though
Your full of lies, if you got a click then they must be theiving hood rats
Your called the best crew but I dont know anything your even good at
this was forced, good personal kinda thing thought.

This was an okay battle and it was very close. I gotta give it to one way because he went after a personal, LP's punches were generic and played, still close battle though...I'll take a forced concept over a played one any day so therefore...

vote: One way
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Old 03-12-09, 05:27 PM   #12
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Pretty decent battle.

One way, you came with some pretty decent stuff. I liked your first bar a good bit, Second was ehh okay I suppose. Good structure, good flow.

LP, that ebay line is hella played. Your second bar was better but still nothing to go ooo about. Overall I think if you would have had a stronger first bar you MIGHT have had a chance.

V/One Way.
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Old 03-15-09, 11:47 PM   #13
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ebay played to fuck now...........

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Old 03-15-09, 11:48 PM   #14
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WTF how did i make that face^^^^ lmao!

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Old 03-16-09, 08:57 AM   #15
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