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phenom1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:36 PM.

Yo Ima Post Mines In A Lil Bit lAter Today?
Are You Gonna Post Yours Today

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High Knucks has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:49 PM.

Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*

Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)

Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***

This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****

Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****

Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******


* Directions For Like AirPlanes
** I Flipped The Bathroom And The Shit From The Toilet Hit The Roof
*** Bay=Keep Him Calm, And Also That’s Where Most Summer Homes Are The Bay
**** He’ll Ask For A ReMatch, Like When Theives Take Double
***** A Fishing Line
****** Point Finger

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take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport

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take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck

what in the fuck is good about this? it doesn't even make sense, not one part of it...the set up is completely irrelevant to the actual"punch" and the punch makes no sense to anything.

you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse

this is fucking basic as well...set up, stupid....punch....WOWWWW...it's so impressive that he added "4 leaf" to somebodies name, which turned his punch into meaning....grab a guy thats worse than you for good luck because his names clova....the wordplay here fucking sucks dude..if you don't see that you're stupid as fuck....not to mention the fact, to even bring up someone so shitty, is to hurt yourself.


i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes

i'll slap you around, like when you're in your room? that doesn't make any sense either....you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes..
that actually wasn't too bad...but the fact that he didn't even set it up AT ALL...let alone decently....is what makes it bad...if he's not going to have punches where the first line sets it up....than what is the purpose of the the other lines?

nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer

basic, no complexity whatsoever....and if i had a dollar for everyime some new fucking tool has used this, i would buy this site, and kick people like you off of it

after i own 91% of the world because of how fucking rich I am.

i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun

once again, these are two seperate lines that have nothing to do with eachother.
2nd line was decent....but it had no fucking set up..which makes it an incomplete punch.

you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport


This is as close as he came to having 1 full complete decent punch....instead, he either used no set up....or his set up just contradicted his follow up

In order to be able to land, or not land....you have to be abloe to fucking fly in the first place...the first line he said your shit just doesn't fly....so to say he couldn't land a decent punch.....is to say that his shit would be flying in the first place....the only this changes....is if the first and 2nd line have nothing to do with eachother...in which case..it was another incomplete punch..which is the story of his whole entire verse.

it was either no punch at all..or incomplete....atleast phenom was able to create complete punches that made sense......

and it's funny you say"shitty this, shitty that"


because it's better to have shitty anything...than nothing at alll.

shut the fuck up, i know that you have probably grown used to the warmth of your friends balls on your fucking forhead over that much time, but you gotta cut the shit....and stop being a biased little faggot who is judging hip hop writing, and not using any elements of hip hop or writing to do so.

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yo good Battle Mayne, But Lets Get Some Votes On This
Votes??????

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Voted For: High Knucks

phenom1
Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
That was pretty weak.
Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
Not bad.
Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
Nah.
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
Not feeling this.
Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
Whack.
Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
No.

Pretty whack verse, nothing to special stood out at all, was actually a pretty difficult read. Work on your structure, a bit on flow, and don't explain everything. If a punch is good it won't need an explanation. Good attempt, keep elevating and dropping.


High Knucks
take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
Not bad.
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
Lmfao.
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
Ehh..
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
Easy, but made me laugh.
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
Word.
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport
I dig it.

Not bad, can tell it's been a while since you've battled. Still got some magic, flow was dope, some punches were pretty funny. You got this easy.

Vote: High Knucks



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Yo Can We Get Some More Votes On This One Please
Good Battle So Far Knucks

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Phenom~~SkepTik~~42-Keyz

TrYoUt ThReAd^^^^^

Voted For: phenom1

This was better no doubt about it no dick ridin good cuz knucks u brag alot for sumone not that great!

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Voted For: High Knucks

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Yo Thanks MAyne, But Is Germ, Bull And Knucks Spose To Have The Same Ip?????

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Phenom~~SkepTik~~42-Keyz

TrYoUt ThReAd^^^^^

shut up, your verse was gay

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open: Phenom- I felt the first line
close: Definantly Phenom1...High Knucks it seemed like you were searching for something to rhyme with "this board" and came up with "airport"...I realize though that this is in keeping with the airport/directions theme from Phenom's first 2 lines. Still a little weak...
personals: tie
metas: Phenom
punches: High Knucks..."you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes" I felt that
multis: Tie
close one...but
Win: phenom

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