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08-24-05, 04:09 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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Will rap for food
IP: C98F 1FA2
Verse for track with nos on cunninlynguists beat.
... I like mics, gotta clutch like jordan, clutch the mic n cord like he clutch the ball n' I like life, but ill take ya life like an abortion, sharp witted, im causin contortions I might slice ya body in portions, and I aint no animal I got dope prose, dope flows so cold i'll have ya nose froze like the coke you been snortin cut you up like a foreskin, dont give a fuck about laws kid.. like forcin a fortune out an unfortunate foreman ima bad omen.. like thunder and lightning i'll appear when its pouring a misfit. some consider me foreign.. I say suck on this bitch I might be twisted... Been trapped n' rapped up in a box half my life... no wonder im so gifted .. my flows lifted above and beyond what comes outta you fuckers n' pawns you hop on top of a beat... fuck that, I make love to the song Dopium, the dudes who rock... drinkin booze for blocks rap and prove im hot, and at the same time prove you're not This fool and nos, the cats that'll snatch you outta ya shoes n' socks ..motherfuckers.
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08-24-05, 04:28 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
The game is to be sold not told
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08-24-05, 04:29 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: C98F 1FA2
Quote:
huuuhh? .... Im real stupid, you cant be saying crazy metaphorical things
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08-24-05, 04:41 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
lol, you know what Im saying.
why would you waste your lyrics in Rv's open mic? especially if they planned for production. |
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08-24-05, 04:51 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: C98F 1FA2
Well im not really "wasting" them... im still gonna use em... and theyre gonna be posted on soundclick anyway. Its always good to get constructive feed.. specially since I havent dropped in a while and I need to get my knack back for this mixtape.
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08-24-05, 05:16 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
yeh I feel that, i just feel like Ive heard enough crit from rv to know what people are interested in hearing. So I have no need to post open mics and get there opinions. but yeh I spose it makes alot of sense just to double check your lyrics.
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08-24-05, 09:48 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: E6EB 1B86
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UPPIN. Remember to leave a link... ill give you feed that helps you improve.
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08-24-05, 10:34 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 80DF 55CD
i liked it
metaphors where nice flow good and structure was real nice the vocab and wordplay were nice but yeah nothing really bad about this drop... keep doing your thing man..e.zZ
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08-24-05, 11:19 PM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
nice shit omb i'm dropping on this track aswell.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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08-25-05, 05:24 AM
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Torching You All
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Yea I Like This Piece Man Real Good Piece Man Keep It Up Yea
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08-26-05, 06:23 AM
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IP: 68F3 D87D
ye dawg a real nice drop.....nice meta's.....good vocab.....with a very nice flow!!!!
well done!!!! 7.5/10 |
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