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Old 04-22-07, 08:13 AM   #1
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Week 3: Jonny Hustle 1-0 .vs. K.ontroverz.Y 0-0

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Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: Jonny 1 bar
Thursday Night: Kon. 2 bars
Friday Night: Jonny 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

Feeding is allowed, and will be optional
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Old 04-22-07, 09:45 AM   #2
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nigga this is nothing...checcin in..
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Old 04-22-07, 12:35 PM   #3
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Good, be cocky..makes it more fun to crush you.

I'm bound to be a mag regular. I know you've noticed...
While your punches are harder to follow than a drunken Moses
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Old 04-22-07, 03:43 PM   #4
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Fucc Feedin.....This shit is Milk & cookies


Johnny?! Hustle! Time is Running out & it's obvious Your Behind..
...Your Bars couldn't Pop like Coke Even if i gave you a free line..
Damnit, When I Spit He Panics, Johnny, I'm 7 Up, So Just Can It..
.....Nigga..Face It, You couldn't win even if K.Stubbz Planned It..




Call The E.R They have another patient on their way...pussy...
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Old 04-22-07, 11:56 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by K.Stubbs
Swaying
Swaying is saying anything after the bars have been dropped to urge voters to vote for you. This can come in the form of self-hyping your own bar or trashing the other bar. Quite simply, swaying will NOT be tolerated. Swaying = Instant DQ. And we are serious about this. If you believe that voters do not understand your punch, explaining your punch is fine, as long as you do nothing but simply explain the meaning of your punch. Any other posts after the punches have been dropped are completely unnecessary.


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Call The E.R They have another patient on their
way...pussy...




Way to read the rules. Too bad that shit talking won't get chu love...
Faggot, all you do is Sway like the dude in the picture above.....
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Old 04-23-07, 12:19 AM   #6
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Both Individuals need to quit freeposting. That is not a sway, a comment made after the bars IN the same post. Is not swaying. unless, its an obvious comment thats a basic sway. Sayin, call the hospital...is not a sway. Now to the punches


Jay-your 1st bar was ok, nothin special man. The overall concept was kind of lame in my opinion. Could have been doper i guess, with better wording.

Kon-both of your bars were worded masterful. Overall i think you executed. 1st bar was in the played region with coke/line. But i've never seen it worded that way, so still good. 2nd bar was better, and very clever. Overall good job

Jon-2nd bar was also weak man, i didn't like it at all. almost as if you found a random pic on google, and typed in the word sway in the engine search. Anyone could have done that, worded poorly as well. didn't like the concept. Overall i think you did MUCH better last week. S'all good though man. i see potential. Keep it up



v/Kon.

Good battle here. good shit on gettin it up early.
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Old 04-23-07, 12:29 AM   #7
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the rules should`ve been worded better than. not bitchin, but i just wasted my last bar. oh well, thanks for voting. 0-1 Kon.


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Old 04-23-07, 02:19 PM   #8
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overall Kon did take this one...

Jonny your first bar was meh but still better then your second one, im pretty sure most know sway and got what you were sayin in the bar just by lookin at the picture therefore it started weak

Kon they were worded pretty well and actually werent that bad...nothing great but enough to pull away with this one

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Old 04-23-07, 04:07 PM   #9
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na......Johnny was more creative and agressive with his punches........Kon you didn't do that bad neither but J took this one v.JH



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Look at Popcorns vote below for the proper voting method.

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Old 04-23-07, 11:16 PM   #10
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lmfao. ^ kinda of bullshit feedbacc is that?

uppin this.
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Old 04-23-07, 11:31 PM   #11
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......just let em vote. you dont see me complaining about the votes.
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Old 04-23-07, 11:41 PM   #12
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look at the differences fool. But yo i could care less its a text battle.

lets get these votes in.
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Old 04-24-07, 05:12 PM   #13
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Kon:
Johnny?! Hustle! Time is Running out & it's obvious Your Behind..
...Your Bars couldn't Pop like Coke Even if i gave you a free line..
^Concept is old. Flipped nicely. Worded good. Overall effect of the punch was mediocre. 2.5/5
Damnit, When I Spit He Panics, Johnny, I'm 7 Up, So Just Can It..
.....Nigga..Face It, You couldn't win even if K.Stubbz Planned It..
^A nice set up. Concept is also played. Wording was good. Effect of the punch was decent. 2/5


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Jonny:
I'm bound to be a mag regular. I know you've noticed...
While your punches are harder to follow than a drunken Moses
^Concept was unique. I seen where you were going w/ this but it just wasn't too direct. Overall effect of this punch was alright. 1.5/5
Way to read the rules. Too bad that shit talking won't get chu love...
Faggot, all you do is Sway like the dude in the picture above.....
^Concept was nice w/ the picture & all. But this punch would of never had any effect if you didn't claimed he swayed. So w/ that being said the overall effect of this punch was so-so. 1.5/5





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Old 04-24-07, 11:23 PM   #14
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jonny...your first had a decent concept...but was worded horribly...

kon...first bar was whack...enough said...it was a weak ass metaphor that went into a punch that didn't diss anyone at all.
your 2nd bar was much better, i still didn't like it a whole lot..just because it wasn't very personal....however..at this point in the battle it's the best bar i've seen.

jonny....your closer was whack...you basically bitched about swaying, when nobody was swaying...and even if it was....there are sooo many ways you could have approached that better...

This vote goes to the person who actually had 1 mediocre punch..and thats kon
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Old 04-25-07, 12:10 AM   #15
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respect the vote. but the first line didnt diss anyone? must of meant his because im pretty sure i put his name in the line itself..
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