deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: contestant,transaction,negotiable,multimedia

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

checkity check

checkin in, i shall post my shit as soon as ive written it

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VC checkity checked in over two days ago,
Guess he couldn’t force the words in time and keep his flow,
This guy aint no mother fuckin MC,
he’s more like a contestant and this is the game show,
And I’m more like the mother fuckin show host, cus we both kno’
That this guy is the feeder from multimedia,
He don’t make headlines he meets deadlines,
A consumer of the ensyclopedia,
Studying the dictionary to read a newspaper, it makes it easier,
He don’t make transactions, nor interactions,
This gay fuck sits at home - alone all night,
With a porno mag’ stickin a dildo up his ass hole - tight
This fucker needs a tracking tag Just so he don’t get lost,
Hands tired from all the mother fuckin dicks he’s tossed,
Pay goes up, but its negotiable, sucks his bosses dick at any cost,
Uses his pubes like tooth floss,
VC, Verbal Constipation? Has 1 day left to spit his shit,
Been workin on it for over 48hours,
Lets see if he posts or if he cowers,
Or if two days of thinkin’ is water washed like golden showers,
This dude is goin down like the two towers…

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nice verse...but battle arent even due until thursday why would i post 3 days ahead of time.. knowing im going to win regardless?....i got u tho ill post for you... since u want to be an asshole

here's my verse emcees.... uppin for one..


albi,goin to win,stop tellin them damn lies/
everybody know they aint fuckin with a *franchyse*/
when these cats gon realize the reason.. why/
,they die,...at the hands of v-c-i-t-y/
cuz they wanna boast like they ill with no tries/
...,but ill cure that illness like penicilli/
ill get at this fag like i was kin to elton john/
like Multimedia, get this cat 60 seconds to get gone/
i'll shit on and bloody this mc like his dome was a tampon/
i'll get u slurring ya words slowly like u was 50 or Camron/
no way you could get millions like a Contestant,and i be regis philman/
take the easy way and pop 10 exstacy pills, man/
it's far less suicidal than combating me/
cuz i'll get you Heavy chested like you was *racking* meat/
i'll get u like a GTA..i Automatically take ya Transactions/
i'll elminate you and *linked up* squad,i'll mkae some dna extractions/
ya contract is non-negiotable,im vanquishing u from my sight/
only one win on rb..............man get the fuck off the site/
i'm playin with this cat cuz he issuing ashy verses so far/
but i stay distributing nothing but a *shit* of Nasty bars/
wanna jump at me,with ya rhymes like u stupid/
i'll place that lethal arrow at ya heart like my name was cupid/
murder this mc then do it multiples times again like Elm Street/
he wanna act beast,ill give him the burger king anguish beef to eat/
it's Class sic the way this *cat spits* ,just might get ya cap split/
with the hollows that followed by non shallow wounds that e*xit*/
im killin this chicken,i must be beatin this dead meat/
i'll re enact the horror of kunta kinte,,and slice of these niggas feet/

done motherfucker.



explantion
1.v city is spelled out each letter v-c-i-t-y
2.penicilli is pronouce pen*nic*cil*lie to rhyme with v-c-i-t-y
3.multimedia is the movie gone in 60 seconds
4.(big rack titties,is heavy,heavy by lead bullets in albis chest)
5.(using Grand Theft Atm,instead of Grand Theft Auto)
6.dna is linked up together as a group
7.ashy verses is dry lyrics
8.the arrow was a gunshot
9.(burger king has new 100% angus beef)

the concept of this match wasnt that bad
but the verses were
the words were easy and the two battlers STILL fucked it up
this was a weak battle
but if I have to vote
then I vote for VC
His verse was better, made more sense
and had more punches
better quality
v/VC

whoa such bold words from a dude whose record is 4-4...get at me when you up your game ...u aint up there forreal onyl reason u someone on rb cuz u got 1,000 plus votes...since november which means you got no life.

good point VC

lol

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breakdown for abli:

flow:good job i don't see any problems here 7/10

volcab: pretty basic but there were some good spots 6/10

punches:mainly open disses and played topics like calling him gay damn that's been done since the old school breakdance and graffetti art days of hip hop but you did address him from line 1 to the end so you gets points for that 6/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for VC:

flow:not working i thought quite as good as abli some of the bars were kinda streched 6/10

volcab:good job here pretty much on par with abli 6/10

punches: played topics for the most part here with your verse too but yours seemed to be worded alot better and seemed to hit more direct and do some damage my fav line,"i'll shit on and bloody this mc like his dome was a tampon/" played idea but some new wording of it good job 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--close battle here but in the end i see VC on top

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

i'll elminate you and *linked up* squad,i'll mkae some dna extractions/
ya contract is non-negiotable,im vanquishing u from my sight/

i'll shit on and bloody this mc like his dome was a tampon/
i'll get u slurring ya words slowly like u was 50 or Camron/

solid punches, nice emta and wordplay, ya came hard dog
thats wot i like 2 see in the league nice job

VC checkity checked in over two days ago,
Guess he couldn’t force the words in time and keep his flow,
This guy aint no mother fuckin MC,
he’s more like a contestant and this is the game show,

excellent opener, u were VERY closer to winning but VC cam that lil harder

better luck next time

vote- VC

hey i saw this guys verse and knew i didnt have to put much effort into it.. as yall shoudl know i flow wayy better than this... as least im sure dirtboy knows.

Blah...

Vote VC

Nothing remotely great here

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ok so ive lost this... thats kool, well done VC! urs WAS the better verse

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