widowed, withered, weathered, and tattered.
anything you thought existed has just been shattered.
scattered in my yard, then shitted on by my doggy.
and spit into puddles until it turns sour and soggy.

no we're not friends anymore, it's over, you messed that up,
don't come crying back to me because I don't want to see you anymore,
all links have been broken, unsaid words on the brink of being spoken,
yet I see you miserable face and realize that your stink is too potent.

thus, I want you to leave me life and never bother me again,
you have screwed up too many times so now I say "phuk you my friend",
I hate to be in your presence and to remain is too fatal,
with that said, I'm pulling the plug on you like the white guy did my cable.....

au revior

huh? Who you talkin bout? I think i have a feeling who, but if i'm wrong tell me... Is it jotoy?

ummmmm.... nah, not her......

Joi says okay! I told that heffa bout gettin on here under my name! So who is it?

I'm not really going to critique this one, though I thought it was good. This looks like you just wanted to vent some anger, which you wrote about well. Soooo, I just wanted to say I read it and liked it.

you know what neva mind cause me myself knows so whateva!

^you should

I personally liked the doggy line....but that's just cuz I like my dog

Thats why she gon Die!

wtf, that's messed up! How you gone..........psh w/e