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06-15-07, 04:40 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Ride With Me *New PT JAWN*
IP: BB78 D6B4
Word. Hot Joint. You better download it
IN case you're wondering this is an album sampler yo! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5453928 Links ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242853 ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241801 |
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06-15-07, 02:17 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BB78 D6B4
dang let's get some more replies!
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06-15-07, 05:42 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
What's hot:
1 Voice/delivery combo sounds good 2 Flow works 3 Slick soundin hook What needs work: 1 Common lyrics 2 more complexity in rhyme scheme? Overall: Solid sounding track bro 1 |
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06-15-07, 10:19 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BB78 D6B4
For real thanks for the feed.
I was trying to keep it really simple for this. People around my way aren't the brightest! |
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06-18-07, 06:45 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
alright listenin as I type. the beat seems hot, I hope you made it lol. I'm not really feelin how the hook sounds so robotic lol it could sound more gurly you know. Anyway your verse is pretty good. Flow is pretty smooth you ridin the beat good. I'm feelin the adlibs you got. The mixing jea I wish i mixed that well. The lyrics is hot I like some of those lines def quotables lol. Anyway pretty hot track.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242923
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06-28-07, 08:24 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3080 CD66
Beat is so fucking chill..Your voice sounds all smooth and shit, its pretty much turning me on. But anyways, Lyrics are pretty simple, but still dope. You don't need to be all complex on some shit like this anyway so who gives a bibble? Not me, that's for damn sure. I like the hook, even though youre not the one singing it
 Overall, I like this shit. Hit up my new song "Blessed To Have You" |
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06-30-07, 07:12 PM
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Addicted
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IP: 06E1 3C3F
the first thing i noticed is your highs are too high......the beat is tight and i like your delivery....i like the echos in your adlibs.......
hook is ight but those vocoder voices is played .....but its still nice..... over all this was coo i like it.....good job  |
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