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12-31-05, 12:05 AM | #1 | ||
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IP:
Good piece guys. Let the votes commense. If anyone views this..
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12-31-05, 12:35 AM | #2 | ||
GG Haterz
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IP:
*waits for 3 weeks to go by and have 2 votes*
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12-31-05, 12:44 AM | #3 | ||
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IP:
Yeah i feel what your saying there....
*Crosses fingers and pm's old participants vote*
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01-01-06, 12:30 AM | #4 | |
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Fuck all of you. That is all.
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01-01-06, 12:47 AM | #5 | ||
GG Haterz
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IP:
Good drop for you too.
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01-01-06, 02:18 AM | #6 | |
Whys That?
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IP:
Rev and DQ, wtf at your versenot making any sense to me. I was waiting for a twist, but you trailed off to a guy falling into a room and getting his pay check?
If im wrong please correct me. You two dropped weak,seriously. Alot of lines began with I or small words, you two should know by now,start lines with verbs or adverbs and it creates alot more imagery. Your vocab is weak, I feel you two just threw this together for the sake of dropping. Hope i dont offend you fam. Just speaking what i thought while reading it. but damn, this is no were near your usual level. vote - suspicious and fathom this |
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01-01-06, 02:21 AM | #7 | ||
GG Haterz
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IP:
That was the twist. It was spose to seem like he was going to jump off a cliff or something, but instead went in for a promotion. Metas.
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01-01-06, 02:25 AM | #8 | |
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IP:
but it didnt link up well, you didnt hint it thru out,in one bar he went from jumping off the cliff to opening a door, you didnt play it out properly.
it hit to sudden with not enough imagery. |
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01-01-06, 10:51 AM | #9 | ||
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IP:
Thanks... Up this
1-0 in our favor.
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01-02-06, 09:00 PM | #10 | |
Whys That?
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IP:
closed those two win remove this tounry congrats
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01-02-06, 09:46 PM | #11 | ||
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IP:
C'mon ysdat.... and every1....
This cant be closed off of a 1 vote decision.... Dont even feel like a good win.... lets see if I can get some ex-participants to vote
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01-02-06, 10:04 PM | #12 | ||
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IP:
Ya, at least 2 more votes saying we lost would be nice.
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01-02-06, 10:29 PM | #13 | ||
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IP:
^ lol.. not like that.. we could use a good break down....
We know hades wont vote and most of the others.. Hades wont because he feels he got cheated..... lil' bastard.....
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01-03-06, 04:26 PM | #14 | |
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Omfg, vote dammit!
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01-03-06, 07:25 PM | #15 | ||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP:
We've Waited Long Enough
Fathom This And Suspicious Win Closed Bitches.
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