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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Blazin Caucasion 3 75.00%
FreeYayo 1 25.00%
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Old 01-02-04, 04:07 PM   #16
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Okay this site is fucked why the hell dont ppl vote on battle's ?

Ive had this open for over a week and its still not closed up yet
will sum more ppl vote already n close this so I can move onto more battles
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Old 01-02-04, 05:42 PM   #17
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i'll give this to blazin for the simple reason his verse was better with ok punchs, and he just dissed him harder.

free yayo opener was good, but then just didnt stay on that level and declined... so overall battle my vote goes to blazin
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Old 01-03-04, 06:52 AM   #18
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close this shit man I wanna start new battlez........................................... ....................
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Old 01-03-04, 07:16 AM   #19
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hey, this was a pretty weak battle, Blazin's verse was a lil' more creative, IF wack, but here's tha breakdown:

Open: Free
Close: Free
Flow: Free
Creativity: Blazin'
Multis: Free
Meta's: Blazin'
Enjoyment: neither

Vote: Free
It was just easier to get through than Blazin's verse.

Return tha favor and hit this shit up:

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe


^(B.F.K.)Not to freepost, but: Flow is judged on how easily the verse fits together as if it were spit to a beat. If a line is a LOT longer than tha one before it, and no matta how fast it's spit, it JUST DOESN'T FIT, that's where it's judged. We're all emcees, and we DO spit differently, but overall, if it doesn't work, it doesn't work.
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Old 01-03-04, 07:48 AM   #20
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thxz 4 the vote but plz hit it up cuz I still got 0 votez, I can't return the favor, need 100 postz. PZ.
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Old 01-03-04, 08:08 AM   #21
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My bad on tha weak explanation. This battle was tough to get through, and it didn't REALLY have a lot of punches, so I DID give it a weak breakdown. I usually give a lot better explanations for the battlez that I vote on. Check if you'd like (Strobe).

Blazin':

So I'm battlin this cat that calls himself Free Yayo/
I'm bout to hand this guy his fifth fuckin Ko yo/
^ehh, ok open, not a strong personal: 4/10

Check it I'm fresha then that prince from the town of Belair/
Ya Skills are a myth like da witch named Blaire/
^This was a wack line: 3/10

You aint neva gimmie a scare like freddy crouger/
This verse will murda ya cuz metaphorically its a german rouger/
^Spelled out meta, but decent line (NOT the first line tho): 6/10

Tha only time you see a deal is on tuesday at KFC/
Kid ya heads more inflated then Pam Andersons tits on VIP/
^ok punch, but didn't really hit hard: 5/10

Now I know ya see me, up in the VIP booth/
Call me ya dental hygenist its painfull im rippin out cha tooth/
^ehh, weak line: 3/10

Tellin tha truth nobody cares how ya feel you aint neva gone make no deals/
Last time you was ridein big ya were 5 yrs old in ya power wheels/
^Deals, huh? 4/10

Yayo cd gets packed away more then Vin Deisel packin fudge/
I jus sentenced ya to your 5th lose now smile n say thank you judge/
^aight close, nothin' great tho: 5/10

Free:

blazin caucasion they should blaze you some caution
cuz u gonna run outta options and end up in that coffin/
^like tha multi's, decent opener: 6/10

I'm battlin' thiz wack fag even though I cant b bothered
I gotta be outta my mind, crazy, I think I lost it/
^umm, ok, sure: 5/10

just like u gonna loze thiz fucking battle
u'r handled man who carez about the shit u mample/
^-What tha FUCK iz "mample"?!?!: 4/10

u can count on losin' cuz my numbers do the shootin'
and the numbers are 187 dot45 6 as I'm used 2 it/
^decent line wit' tha explanation: 6/10

to close this thing, I'm gonna need a nice line to end this shit
I juzt like dissin' ya, u like snitchin' like 50 did on prince/
^first line was filler, second was a decent close: 6/10

SO:

Blazin': 30/70 = 42.8% (not) ill

Free: 27/50 = 54% (not REALLY) ill (either, but came stronger in this battle -if I can say that)

And here's my battle link. Hit this up wit' some input and an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103166
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Old 01-03-04, 08:44 AM   #22
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mample iz u know when someone talkin' quiet and shit, maybe itz spelled out otherwise but I'm from belgium and we dun talk english round here. And I mean votin' for me when I said hit it up, not explain it like that though I really appreciate that, I mean on top of the page put ya vote out. PZ.
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Old 01-03-04, 09:42 AM   #23
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Vote - Blazing

Way Better Lines..Even Though Their Were Pretty Weak He Came Out Better Then YaYo..YaYo Yah Verse Had Some Pretty Good Flow, I Seen A Lil Set Of Multies At Times..But I Didn't See Punchlines Harder Then Blazing Own..
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Old 01-03-04, 02:02 PM   #24
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Thx for the vote this battle wasnt great but will someone close it already its been open forever an i wanna battle more ppl

and Spekta u talk alota shit for havin sucha weak ass battle record,
How about me and u battle and u can be my 2nd victory
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Old 01-03-04, 02:13 PM   #25
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aight, this battle was pretty good.

blazin came out with some good shit, pretty good punches and good wordplay. overall a good verse.

freeyayo...pretty weak. had a few ok punches but they didnt really work too well. not enough wordplay to match blazin.

vote: blazin caucasion

i spent time on your battle, spend time on mine.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...adid=102139--vs 730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=101943-- vs prophacyz
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Old 01-11-04, 02:42 AM   #26
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close this shit blaze won
common yall gots ta close shit up in here.............................................. .................................................. .
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Old 01-11-04, 03:10 AM   #27
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You know how fucking retarded you are....
Young J is Blazin......You fucking queer
...go kill yourself..You're lucky your too wack
Or else I'd report it... but then again I might just report
Stupid Fucks now a days
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Old 01-11-04, 11:39 AM   #28
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your cool man it dont mattah i aint commin on this site any mo anyway so peace............................................. .........................................
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