Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
01-08-05, 03:58 PM | #16 | ||
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
no break down needed
Ill, your structure was fucked to shit. really no need for the highlight either. explanations are wack. punches were really weak. u need to try and be more creative most of ya verse was stretched. Nice verse prem. not great but decent punches, nice structure. basically, u took this. v/ Prem |
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