i think this is how you do it

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ok...
blind spits
10 bars min..
ill go first. ill start when you check in






****checks in****

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aiight
took you long enough

lil shits like C.Quip'll never have a chance
kids only 14, he should be at neverland ranch
10 line minimun, i just need one line
im lyin' on word "Nickelodeon" and i'm fine
i read the profile,46 posts a day, dont quit your day job
im pissing you off worser than when the dolphins missed the playoffs
took you long enough to check in, were you beating your meat?
you're a loser from miami, not to be confused with the heat
you're whole state sucks even your state of mind
you're a living punchline and a waste of my time



aiight.. that was lame but... oh well.... bring it

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Microphone Wreck..1...2..
Yo Shizz
Check my M.O, i been spliting heads with flows that impact at yah back like a shottie blow..I'll explode as my rhymes let go,Flows attacking yah spine leaving you're neck froze==
Yah dead bro! Heads all down in the ground like ostriches..I'll disperse yah genes and have yah DNA dissapear like aborted kids==
I'll blow yah ribs and deface yah face with acid just to hurt you.. Then rip out yah skeleton and still have a bone to pick with you==
See what cad do? I'll leave you with a blazed crew yah fake!..I got you in the wrong state of mind, get a map to get cha mind straight==
Have yah lines raped then leave yah dome mis-placed with my scripts..Shizz with an album? i wouldn't check his single if i was into online relationships==
My scripts'll leave yah disected with the first clip black..Yah straight wack! could steal Hi'Tech printers and would still miss the facts==
My lyrics hazmat, with raps that got more hard lines then Mikes Lemonade plant hats..While yah passed out on yah back flat, I'll leave yah forehead with a "I'm Wack" tat==
Fuck that..Yah wack black..You're bitch gets fingered more then a sax..You're wraped..and caped..Fuck this battle..Im gone black..

C.Quip got this..Shizz came way to basic..he underestimated him..thats why he lost..C..your bars was kind of stretched..but good punches..you're in the wrong state of mind get a map get yo mind strate..or something like that..that shit killed it..plus..that online rlationship..that was all dope..C..you get my vote..peace..

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ok this battle was ok, shizz had a good structure and flow but it was basic. C had betta punches and his lines were harder. Good battle but i'm gonna vote for C.

oh yea give an honest vote for this battle:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101839

lil shits like C.Quip'll never have a chance
kids only 14, he should be at neverland ranch
5/10 Was a good idea but was played yo, try to avoid that whenever possible just make both lines be about the SAME topic
10 line minimun, i just need one line
im lyin' on word "Nickelodeon" and i'm fine
4/10
i read the profile,46 posts a day, dont quit your day job
im pissing you off worser than when the dolphins missed the playoffs
6/10
took you long enough to check in, were you beating your meat?
you're a loser from miami, not to be confused with the heat
5/10 average line
you're whole state sucks even your state of mind
you're a living punchline and a waste of my time
6/10
Shizz I like how you kept it SHORT but it was almost TOO short, short and sweet is a GREAT style but u gotta come HARDCORE with the punches if its gonna be that short dude
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Check my M.O, i been spliting heads with flows that impact at yah back like a shottie blow..I'll explode as my rhymes let go,Flows attacking yah spine leaving you're neck froze==
5/10 lotaaaaa filler nigga
Yah dead bro! Heads all down in the ground like ostriches..I'll disperse yah genes and have yah DNA dissapear like aborted kids==
6/10.....the second line KINDA made sense
I'll blow yah ribs and deface yah face with acid just to hurt you.. Then rip out yah skeleton and still have a bone to pick with you==
0/10 dude same word at the end of each sentence and the word before it didnt RHYME! LAME but refrain from that shit nigga
See what cad do? I'll leave you with a blazed crew yah fake!..I got you in the wrong state of mind, get a map to get cha mind straight==
4/10.....was a blind spit, who knows maybe it was an accident but its just like his closer nigga
Have yah lines raped then leave yah dome mis-placed with my scripts..Shizz with an album? i wouldn't check his single if i was into online relationships==
4/10.......
My scripts'll leave yah disected with the first clip black..Yah straight wack! could steal Hi'Tech printers and would still miss the facts==
4/10
My lyrics hazmat, with raps that got more hard lines then Mikes Lemonade plant hats..While yah passed out on yah back flat, I'll leave yah forehead with a "I'm Wack" tat==
6/10
Fuck that..Yah wack black..You're bitch gets fingered more then a sax..You're wraped..and caped..Fuck this battle..Im gone black..
4/10
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you had alot more lines, so ill subtract your worst scored phrases to equal shizzezzzzzz
Close battle
CQUIP definately had more flow and alot more words but if they are pointless and are talking about yourself then its not any good. You would do good in the "FREE STYLE CYPHER" forum, anyway both elevate ur punches
Shizz wins by a lil though he needs work too

C.Quip got this...fuck ya'll sayin..

...his punches were better...
.....his structure, well...that needs work..
..his wordplay was better...
....his rhyme scheme was better...
...his overall diss and directness was edgy but still in his favor..

overall - C.Quip

c quip.....this shit was just more there.....you had more in depth flow, puches were better and you just beat this kid silly......
no offense shiz you were too basic.....
vote= c quip

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Cadqwip Took This By A Long Shot Like GirrFES With Riffels

But On The Rea; It Was Nice Verse And the Other Kid Lacked Punches.

vote-Cadqwip

It's hard to compare these two because the styles are so dissimilar. Cquip needs to work on his structure - it's a pain in the ass to read his verse.

Puches - Cquip. Shizz didn't make his punches personal enough.

Flow - Tie. The flows were so different its hard to compare.

Creativity - Cquip, but this was pretty close. I really liked the line about the online relationship. Shizz's verse used lots of played stuff.

Wordplay - Cquip. Check the online relationship line like I said above.

So my vote would go to C.Quip.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093