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Old 03-16-04, 04:24 AM   #1
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Exclamation My Best Track (so far)

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iight im new to this site...and my newest couple trackz peepz are sayin are pretty good...so lemme know wutchu think
holla wit some comments

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/d...25zeromusic.htm

my 2 newest trackz are..

"In The Past"
"You Never Know"

holla atcha boi
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Old 03-18-04, 08:35 PM   #2
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your flow to the beat is sick. the vocab is sick too. Deep shit.....yo could u vote on this text battle..its sorta weak though
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Old 03-22-04, 05:49 PM   #3
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i liked it...
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Old 03-22-04, 05:59 PM   #4
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word...any more comments or critisicm would be muchly appreciated
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Old 05-04-04, 04:25 PM   #5
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it was ok..
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Old 05-11-04, 03:31 AM   #6
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i know this isnt a comment on the two tracks you wanted comments on, but the links didnt work and the discription to "Events" caught my attention. Constructed with the use of multies. True emcee talent. No shit? lol.

Ya know the first part (the singing) was kinda cool. I dug the offbeat approach.. sort of monotone. I was feeling the idea, but the execution could have been better. The beat was hot. i loved the beat because it was so moody. It really seemed to set the tone. Lets talk bout the vocs, cuz no matter how bad ass your beat is, if your flows suck then everything sucks. But that shit was ill dude. Your flow went in and out, fluxuated a bit, but finished on verse 3 strong as hell. that truely impressed me alot.

overall i was feeling this track.

oh yea, and Whitey's a penis.
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Old 05-21-04, 04:41 PM   #7
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^^^ this is the beat section... not audio section you imbicile!!!

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Old 05-21-04, 05:04 PM   #8
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good beat and nice lyhric's.............
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Old 06-10-04, 12:51 PM   #9
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i like it you could be the next big thing.........i'd listin to you
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