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12-11-04, 07:12 AM | #181 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 185D 918B
Even a stoic needs to reveal his purest emotions
But mine are hidden on bottom of the deepest oceans Hands in my hair, trying to figure out how to put it in words Looking for my own place in between all these herds Searching for one expression to define what i'm portraying Want to make you discover all levels to see what i'm saying Seeking for that one line to make you stand still for little while Proud of my writing style as long as i see you smile Next topic: urge to drain the ocean (it exists...for real...hehe) DQ
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12-11-04, 04:17 PM | #182 | |||
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IP: DEB2 BDC7
The teardrops from the sky, raining my emotions...
I stop by to look why, my urge to drain the ocean... Lift the water bodies, and drain it to empty space... I feel the oceans abused, Taken as human waste.. My desire to remove it, now its has finally come... The people starve to death, Earth's finally done... Sped Through Typing... Next Topic: The Last Bastion (Make It Suspenseful And Deep) I Want Someone Good To Do This. |
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12-15-04, 03:23 PM | #183 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 35B1 73E4
THis is the last bastion on the last battlefield...
I'm ready to give my life...don't care if i get keeled... i watch the blood speel all over the surface... All these lives taken over a battle so worthless.... I step up to teh gun tower hopin ta get a shot... i couldn't quite make it time no matter how hard i fought... Everyone was tryna get in and nobuddy was movin.. Met the colnel and the seargent but none of them i'm salutin... They act like a bunch of cowards when the goin get too ruff.... And now that we at the final battle the enemies called thier bluff.... I can see why but...it's too bad that i'm in the middle... My battalion still on the ground fightin although they're riddled... more like perplexed and confused and even scared.... But i would be too if i was down there physically impaired... i guess now that i look at it i am sort of afraid.... To give my life in the last battalion and have this place as my grave.... suspenseful enuff for u.......anyways.... next topic:ur in the enemy line of fire.....
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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12-15-04, 08:09 PM | #184 | |||
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IP: DEB2 BDC7
Damn.... You Need Improvement...
Stuck in this damn battle, theres no room to run... I feel like i'm hated.... the way I'm being gunned... (Pause) .................................................. ................. .................................................. ................. *Gunshot Fires* .................................................. ................. Ok... He Died........ Topic: Strategic Play (Now Please Don't Do This If Your Not Good) (Make It Creative) |
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12-16-04, 01:53 PM | #185 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 4F1B 4844
Disguised by a mask, another stranger in Venice
For i shall not bask or expose my task, my menace My entire being is a hidden threat, a dark silhouette Even you are unaware as we dance this last minuet Or so i believe but oh, how your radiant eyes can conceive Could it be i found a purer soul on this midsummer eve? Or is it possible that the tricker has been tricked? I fade away, torn apart by this hostile conflict Strategic play has failed, words won't do, i falter Your true colors unveiled, forever left behind at the altar Creative enough for you? Next Topic: Your Utopia
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12-19-04, 10:35 PM | #186 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3810 391F
Aaahh yes my utopia..something of my own...
Although the only time i'm able to reach it is when i'm blown I can't help myself i'm nappy and need a comb.... Plus i wake up everyday to the same old dirty home.... My day is spent thinkin bout how i can get there.... It's not fair i wish that i had a great lair... that i could chill in just like a villain... Higher than anything cuz of massloads of penicliin... But whatever i'll be going back soon... whether i die or not will be determined by the shrooms.... next topic: u have a phobia of old people....
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One of the reasons that they call me Def by Mouf... Is cuz I chew niggaz up and spit they insides out... Def vs. Lawless (Hs) |
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01-06-05, 08:19 PM | #187 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
topic: u have a phobia of old people....um...ok ...Wrinkles,false teeth,bitterness,and alsymers... ..I can't escape it..in every bingo meeting there all hired.. ...it scares me the scary faces and noises they making... ..there all faking..being vurnurable..they been acive lately.. ...can't tell you what they want..but so quick to state they hate me... ..ringing the yellow cow bells awake me..and still they ageing.. ...grandmother's place in the summer..got me in a bundle... ..yellin alone as a couple..but around others they getting humble.. ..they must plan there act..get in hudles..and take the route.. ...to overpower those after there birth..and eliminate the youth.. Iight nice topic..it made me rap a lil different..thanks topic:building a birdhouse (trying to challenge you)
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01-06-05, 09:22 PM | #188 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: 28AD 5545
wood on wood, so many complications, it will alter the condition of one's mind
trying to find, a screw that matches a hole of the same kind the final display is a place for birds to stop when needing to be fed completing this is a puzzle for the brain, like a jigsaw embeeded in your head tears and blood are shed, from difficult complexity and pain causing splinters finishing it off by drilling a perfect 4 inch diameter circle in the center the finished product is one that can pleese my intelecutuall needs sitting with a cup of coffee in the window, and watching the birds feed topic: keys missing from the keyboard |
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01-06-05, 10:32 PM | #189 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
topic: keys missing from the keyboard somebody g*ess which letter's missing..which letter is it.. to find o*t yo* better listen..it sho*ld ring a bell like a pedal visit.. now the letter looks like a V don't be decieved..its also a vowel.. hold yo*r nose becas*e with a P..its a smell thats comes off so fo*l..(P-U) you can't point your finger and sho*t..this letter at MC to call em o*t.. this letter's what its all abo*t..to say it..put yo*dfgfdgr to*nge *p and p*sh you just said there word..its the 1st so*nd of the hiss of s*mm*t.. its at the end of the alphebt and at the the hat of russle.. why yo* think it was a h*ssle..for me to tell yo* f*ck you.. it rhymes tryna be original ..what letter's missin lol next topic:safe to say...
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01-08-05, 04:18 AM | #190 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: DEEC 8168
I thinks its safe to say, That this place is grey
In different shades, that change in vivid ways Its safe to say, alot of things stay the same Like hatred against someone for being diverse And people not getting credit for a wise verse Ignorance will survive as long as humans Forever in hearts of men consuming As long as existance has no meaning Violence will be in the smoke gleaming next topic: Greed |
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01-09-05, 08:18 AM | #191 | |||
Simple.
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
I want it so much, that i'm risking the welfare of my kid's.
Braving exposure, new to rag's, having my young staring @ bin lid's. Goal's been surpassed but this....i crave even more....with all my soul. A treasury beyond passion, and a need that harnesse's cannot control. Greed foil's my eye's and obstruct's my seeing clearly, and feeling real. For greed is the reason i'm in this wheelchair, emotion's and leg's, i can't feel. ..Ok next topic is... Blinded By Light's.
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01-13-05, 09:17 PM | #192 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
staring in a gaze somthing has abstructed my visions of destruction induction to this light shining so brightly my view is being corrupted seduction of my mind to figure the source of the light that im percieving leaving my steps off balance and i begin to wonder,possibly im dreaming recieving the notion of a great ease coming to rest coming so soon abuse my ways which are being bought from bad to good, bad consumed this light has blinded my ways of distruction and finally i get to the source and at heavens gates i rest and nonetheless i realize this was god's course next topic:abuse
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01-13-05, 09:26 PM | #193 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7B4D 9A9B
...god dammit dad quit hitting me so hard... ...my only option left is to run... far... oh so far... ...hes in a drunken rage and im so small and hes so large... ...he socks me in the jaw and cry for mom.... ...but she cant hear me cuz shes run and is far gone... ...this all started cuz she wouldn't fuck his hard on... ...i collect myself... fuck his wealth... I'd rather go to jail... ...i grab the pistol in the closet... mafucker go to hell... weerd my first topical in ages... topic: your horribly injured in a one car accident in rural wyoming |
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01-13-05, 09:30 PM | #194 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: 3240 794D
living life in a different way, each day walking home from school unlike others
most kids happy to get out, but she leafves just to see her parents hitting each other the next day she neva knows just exactly wut might happen her mom dead, her dad dead, or even the police cleaning up her blood with a napkin' brothers gone, he took up rapping, started some bullshit, and died laughing two tempers ouuta this world, her and her fathers heads were always clashing eventually she got tired of it, and decided to commmit, self inflicted, suicide but it didnt work...in an er, with a veggy brain,and paralyzed left side, is how she died. *keystyle* topic: life is froze (be creative wit it, broad topic) |
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01-13-05, 09:31 PM | #195 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9F36 9809
Frozen in a Blank time, I seem to can't tell.
A break in the future past and present and hell. The time is cold though the clock does not tick. I feel a shiver though my spine as though it's a trick. As I walk furthermore, a fall into a dark deep abyss. Then Time unfrezzes and i realized i was taking a piss! ROFL lmao
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