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01-23-06, 09:07 PM | #1 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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Real Talk ft. Snypa and Prozak
IP: 8733 3D5C
www.soundclick.com/paranoid05
1st verse: Paranoid Hook: Paranoid 2nd verse: Snypa 3rd verse: Prozak I'll post links up later...and remember to leave links when you drop feed. Enjoy. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629831 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629817
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01-23-06, 09:15 PM | #2 | |||||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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IP: 8630 C252
listning.......................................... .......
beat coo............................................. flows off and on..................................... delieveryz lackin too.................................. lyircs r cool.......................................... qualityz ight.......................................... hooks plain but ight snypas verse falls off at first(sound like u spittin to fast) deleivetys ight..................... emotions good............................. pressence is ok hook again blahhhhhhhhh prozac................................... flows off.................................... delieveryz off.......................... lyrics r ight(lol at tha names) emotions gettin better.................. pressence is gettin better alot could of been worked on in this it was ight i guess..................................... but lacked tha thingz i said keep droppin and ill leave a link innna min
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01-24-06, 12:39 AM | #3 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 851E D4AE
ill drop feed later tonight or tommorow after noon
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01-24-06, 03:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
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IP: 0AC8 1559
i dont see the track on there?
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01-24-06, 05:48 PM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 503E 8CD1
yea me either?.
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01-24-06, 10:16 PM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 9EDE 2353
It should appear....hmmmm....weird...thanx for tha feed Trakk
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01-25-06, 12:57 PM | #7 | |||
OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
haaa...was funny lookin at mario dance while this beat played
1st cat needs better EQ levels on the vocals...kinda muffled...up the highs flow is decent...kinda mechanical the hook?...not mixed well at all...needs a "chorus" effect on it 2nd cat...better EQ levels flow is decent **liked the echo effect in there lyrical, this was adequate on both parts, but nothing special decent drop fellas P.S. wasn't feelin prozak 1 |
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01-25-06, 02:58 PM | #8 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 236C C3DC
thanks for the feed bro
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01-25-06, 03:31 PM | #9 | |||||||
pSa - We Ridin Harder Then Blondes
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IP: 0AC8 1559
stop tryna be Canada's Finest when u know i am^ haha
ok i see the track now, paranoid- flows decent, deliverys ok, mic presence needs to be worked on. emotion iiight, also could use work. Snypa- flows ok, emotions iiiight, deliverys coo, mic presence is coo, lyrics r decent..coo verse Prozak- flows horrible lol..dont think he was on the beat AT ALL lol..and thats all ima say cause i dont wanna trash talk the dood.. hook- eh, im not really feelin the flow or lyrics.. shud be more catchy. decent track, keep practicin, n droppin http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103 holla back^^^^ Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"
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01-25-06, 04:12 PM | #10 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Ill feed just paranoid.
this tracks ok, emtion could be a bit better, sound robotic kinda. Beats meh.reasonable track. |
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01-25-06, 08:34 PM | #11 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 236C C3DC
why would u only leave feed for paranoid?
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01-25-06, 08:51 PM | #12 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
^he's in love with me, that's why. but snypa stop posting k, let the people post their thoughts on it k.
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01-26-06, 05:32 PM | #13 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: B397 C96F
Paranoid - You had a ok flow, you used some ok rhymes, you didnt come as good as I thought you would though. 6/10
Snypa - I liked your verse the best, flow was iight, you had some good lyircs I was feelin' ya rhymes. 7.5/10 Prozak - You had a ok startin' but after that it was borin' and lame, you need to up ya game. 3/10 OVERALL TRACK - 5/10 was a pretty good track, keep it up snypa and para.
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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two... ....Because Homie i'm The Shit!
TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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01-26-06, 06:01 PM | #14 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: F7E8 406E
beat i dont really like it but its not horrid
para voice is cool delivery is ok nothing special but has def improved flow is on for the mos part but sounds like robotic lol lyrics were good hook not feeling it to be honest 2nd guy lyrics were good flow was pretty good presence was ok could use a litle improvement 3rd guy bad voice bad flow ok lyrics not feeling them you need improvement overall 5.5/10
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01-26-06, 11:10 PM | #15 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 7C71 7BD2
*listening*
I'm digging this beat......for real. This isn't that bad. You seem to end your words short though......like, you say your words quick, but your flow isn't fast. Especially at the last word of each bar. You could use a little more behind your delivery too. Next dude had a little better presence but the rest was about the same as paranoid. Last dude I wasn't feeling at all. He sounded like he had a bag of nickles in his mouth.....for real. Another thing, the hook should have had a little effect added to it so it sounded separate from the verses.
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