1st guy sounds aiight...flow needs work,its not horrible..it kinda fits the beat,but i didnt peep ur other tracks so i dont know if thats ur normal flow or just for this...but rhyme scheme seems cool..it seems like u mumble at times...before the beat changed..afer the change it seems better..overall not bad,but we all get better with time so keep droppin..

2nd guy..mumbling a lot,ur voice faded out at times and came back,just stay at the mic,your schemes pretty nice too..flows a lil better...

and um yeah...

return the favor...and peep my track please..