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View Poll Results: Look now..vote for whoever beat tha otha emcee...so who won
Phat Mic 5 71.43%
YoungStar* 2 28.57%
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Old 04-14-04, 11:30 PM   #16
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yo i gotta give this to phat mic although it was close
i think he came harder nad had better word choice
both of there punches were nothing special and pretty dry
however i feal phat mic used better vocab, transitions, and personals.
so 4 raw lyrics i side with PM and his closer helped me make my mind

"start losing to some newbs and that is really low slumin
lubricate and masterbate thats the only way ur comein' "

call it how i c it
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Old 04-15-04, 05:33 PM   #17
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yo phat mic i'on kno but wut ya think bout Franchize's vote-
he basically voted for you because your a newb...when i was there no one showed pity for me cuz i was a newb..what ya think
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Old 04-15-04, 06:07 PM   #18
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Flow-phat
Vocab-phat
Structure-tie...
I Wasn't Feelin Neither 1's....both Kinda Of Basic......work On Flow And Punchlines And Youll Be Good.......

Hate 2 This But The Best Mc Was Phat Mic.......
 
Old 04-23-04, 03:57 PM   #19
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Red face y'all both could have done betta...

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vocabulary: Phat Mic
punches: Young Star
structure: ties up
overall flow: Phat Mic

y'all could have did that betta... I got to give it to Phat Mic. Young Star*, i respect the fact that u a gurl but if a nigga try to bring it to ya, ya gotta drop him hard. Cuz y'all both had some weak lines but who doesn't... This was too close, Young Star battle me some time aight? Y'all get at me...
Just Lovely

My vote is... Phat Mic
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Old 04-23-04, 04:37 PM   #20
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phat mic -"lubricate and masterbate thats the only way ur comein'"
^^^This was ur best line.Get more like these.

"its rb, this isnt nashville star so go back to texas"
^first offf,you did not rhmye it.bizzare&defenseless does not rhyme with it.\
So come on now,you can do better.



Young-
yamic is turned off cuz nobody wanna hear tha mess
my rymes are infectious they git in ya body and infest
^^^This was ur best line

ya rymes hold no portions they really lackin tha ill
i'm a fuckin god and like jesus i'll devour u as if u wuz my last meal
^good punch line,but did not rhyme.meal&ill does not rhmye.It was good,but you should have rhymed it.

Flow would have to go to Phat Mic.Although he did not rhyme a few words as well......Young's mess up caused a nice punchline to sound messed up.

Vote-Phat MIc.
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Old 04-23-04, 06:58 PM   #21
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yo, this was a pretty tight battle. I was feelin' both of y'alls verses. I liked the flo from both of you. The punches is what will make the difference here. I think that Phat Mic's punches hit a LITTLE harder than YoungStars. But they were both good verses, but my vote is too Phat Mic. Sorry, Young.
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