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Old 09-02-04, 03:12 AM   #1
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>>>>>what its like<<<<

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POLICE..

"FREEZE" drop to the ground dont move a muscle..
i told you this spot was illegal to hussel...

THUG

but my rent was due last week...

POLICE

I said "shut the fuck up dont speak"..

THUG

please dont shoot Im showing compliance...
but you cops are criminals..in your own alliance..
what so are you gonna shoot me if I dont stay silent..

POLICE

no Ill shoot you and claim you where violent...
Ill say it was self defence...
so lay back before you put YOURSELF to rest..

THUG
you cant treat me like this.. i was just doing my work..
theres no reason for you to be going bazerk...
i was'nt doing anything illegal..
i got 3 kids..and i gotta feed all...

POLICE

you want me to feel sorry for you?
doesnt the fact that i want to see you dead worry you..
id gladly be the one to put you in your grave..
or sell you off as an ecuador slave...

THUG
all you cops ae just the same...
you the criminals ..using us to blame..
im not gonna listen ..i must remain...
your badge glisting ..makes me go insain...
it gives you that much power...


POLICE

fuck up nigger before i drop you offf this tower...
or i could take you to the cell and beat you for an hour..


THUG
wait a second pig ..look where you are..
look up the street..you see that car...
its filled with all my homies....
they gone murder you ..if you dont let go me...
you aint got time to get backed up...
the high as fuck...yeah they cracked up...

POLICE
oh shit i i didnt relise that they were there...
im lucky you made me aware...
it time for me to retreat...but ill be back next week...
im not stopping on you ..untill the doors locking on you..

THUG
bitch this my area...
you come fuck with me agian ...ill bury ya...
you wont be back ...its too scary ha?.....




just some bordom shit i decided to write..

any comments welcome

pz
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Old 09-02-04, 12:02 PM   #2
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that shit is raw its nice, keep it up~
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Old 09-02-04, 12:22 PM   #3
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structure was kinda fucked...so was the rhyme scheme...but this is a true piece and I feel u...nice shit dawg jus work on it a bit...nice...
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Old 09-03-04, 11:37 AM   #4
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thnx 4 the comments

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