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Old 05-29-04, 04:45 AM   #1
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Exclamation <<<>>> HELIUM...KICKIN DEEP SPITS <<<>>>

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I aint never been the kinda guy to be a wise man//
Livin life thoughtless knowin life's not a long time span//
But knowin now I gotta grow up, aint never land, my times come, time to show up, I aint peter pan//
Life responsibilities I jogged away, than soon ran, soon hadda realise in my own head im my own man//
Fuck following... I want my own path, my own consequences, deal with my own wrath//
Dont wanna grow old like I lived life in a bath* wanna hold knowledge like a sorcerers staff//
Make my own decisions, screw the aftermath, doin my own thing, use my own mind, I'd rather~that//
Wanna discover knowledge whilst knowing I know nothing, get through life without, lies or bluffing//
Gonna take my time to the finish line, breath easy, no puffing, settle hate, no begrudgin//
I came into life wit my word, not thuggin, so ima leave it wit dignity, no frontin//
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Old 06-02-04, 12:19 PM   #2
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now this 1 aint to bad either(def better then the last) but u need sopme work on the flow some of dees lines are 2 long...................
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