yo this is a little piece me an my boy is workin on.Pretty soon I'll make it an audio.Tell me whut ya'll think




$KEEPIN WORK$ MAST3RM!ND street wise,half baked,addicted ta dirt/
im just a hussilin fool know for keepin' work/
A nightmare like elm,enter a world of hurt/
always got that green and we keep it burnt/
yo i'm project,that means a suspect/
since i'm already survyed,I might as well blaze/
We from a-town,city of tha stars and movin bricks/
slangin halves,quarters,dimes, and nicks/
young thugs out in tha world dyin' fa shit/
I'm a hustla meaning that i'm built fa this/
Tha whole worlds against ya,tryin ta get rich/
can't trust shit,tha world's a bitch/

Tell me whut ya'll think.This is just some of it.It has'nt really been edited.

hey ya'll hit this up.

lyrically, I liked it dawg. But every cat raps about that, get deeper, naw mean. But I thought it was good. just bring more of you into your style. ONE

I read this already

aight......first it's a lil basic......but anything with a beat can be mADE TIGHT if they put the right style.....so as text it's not that great....but for audio it should be aight........and if u want it to be a better threat ur vocab has to be deeper.....and more symbolic....but then again most audios out there r just simple rhymes raped right......so good luck with ur audio

Thanx.any more comments?

come on yall uppin for more feedback. I'm thinkin bout makin this shit 2 nite.Tell me whut yall think.