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09-16-05, 12:39 AM | #1 | |||||
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Wanna have the nice whips ?
the nice homes? yachts n ships? placing ya chips got ya dice to roll ready or not here ya go. Blood sweat n tears mixed with experience n years all gather up to follow ya dreams so what ya poor? you gotta score to be seen not remembering where you came from not gonna back down on those who gave you the time of day but you run when u see em passin the other way. Nervous and impervious to the impending danger could fall flat on ya face and lose to a stranger. No matta ya game, its always the same, loser takes all the shame but the winner gets all the glory and fame.. Man I wanna be...I gotta be a..... Wanna have the nice whips ? the nice homes? yachts n ships? placing ya chips got ya dice to roll ready or not here ya go. Finally, Fall back on what ya know, show em you got the balls to flow. No matta ya vice, go through with it nice so you can rise to the top with faces and flaunt. Just remember ya name and remember ya game that always somewhere someone bigga than you is aflame. Just pray to God you’ll make em go insane and don’t forget lest ye fall that you of all others have made it most of all.
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09-17-05, 12:54 AM | #2 | ||||
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this was pretty good, flow was good, emotion was good also, nice topic, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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09-17-05, 01:23 AM | #3 | ||||
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Drop 2 links or this will be closed
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09-17-05, 01:50 AM | #4 | ||||||
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Hmm. The problem here is, this piece is too.. too vague. I think you gotta get more in-depth with your drops. I can see the whole story behind it and ish, but still. Gotta go into depth.
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09-18-05, 07:50 PM | #5 | |||||||
Bringin The Rukas
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nice flow good topic it was good
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