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02-17-06, 10:30 PM
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Artist, that simple
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*The Artist* ft. Jay Z - *The Artist Mixtape Edition*
IP: 317F 66B6
The Artist - Featuring Jay Z
Intro - Jay Z Verse 1 and 2 - G Deuce Chorus - G Deuce Mixing - G Deuce and Vocal - Eyez Productions http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222533 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=221608&page=2 Drop feed and i will return the favor. checked
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02-17-06, 10:41 PM
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El Padrino
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wow....
deff upped your quality and Elevated your delivery and all that!!!!! this is dope kid! yo......... GET ON THE OYD ROSTER!!!!!!!!!!! holla at me!!
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02-17-06, 10:43 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
hahaha, fa sho.
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02-17-06, 11:21 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
first thing I noticed was that your quality sounds a little to fake. way different then your other shit man. your delivery could also use work on this track, needs more energy man. your flow was pretty fluid though, kept me motivated to keep listening. not a great song though man. just not feelin this one. the beat is gay and shit to lol. keep goin hard though.
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02-18-06, 12:02 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
uppin............
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02-18-06, 12:11 PM
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OYD
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IP: C527 8B3F
G Deuce ROCKS
but...Imma hit this up a bit lata! Last edited by Tha Q. : 02-18-06 at 12:27 PM. |
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02-18-06, 12:31 PM
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OYD
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IP: C527 8B3F
aiight
nice beat i like the jay sample ur flow is hot voice reminds me of Tupac I'm feelin |
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02-18-06, 04:57 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: A48A D00F
duece been awhile i listened to ya shit, intro jay got it locked as ussual...
yo quality was little different since its studio vs pc or somehting else..but yo delivery was nice...emotions was little lackin but the rest was butter famz
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02-18-06, 06:54 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
oh yeah.. dat shit at da beginin is tight and i like how that beat comes in ... aight aight good build up just waiten to here the drop.. oh ok.. i thought it was gonna come alot more raw than that but its nice and smoothe dope shit kid..i cant really understand any of the lyrics it sounds good but its not clear enough for me to catch what you sayin.. i like that one sylable rhyme scheme there for a grip.... yeah that shit ill a-r-t-i-s-t
yeah short lil drop no hoook or nothin really just some deep emotional shit.. if i was on that kinda shit it woulda been off da chain..but still solid shit son 8/10
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02-18-06, 06:55 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
yo plus get at me with a collab somtime cuz...........
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02-18-06, 07:36 PM
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IP: 57FB 0ECE
I don't know why i'm leaving feedback, prolly cuz I was curious to see whether or not you used a beat I used...........which you did. I dunno what's off about your flow but it seems very off. I don't really like your voice, it sounds like Doomsday with a stuffy voice or something. However your lyrics are fresh and stuff. The chorus kinda comes outta nowhere, but hey, not much you can do now. It was iight, nothing that really caught my attention, but keep droppin.
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02-18-06, 07:43 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
Lol at sayin my flow was off. Anwayz, Ummm....uppin....
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02-18-06, 08:03 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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aight i'm peepin now,the beat is pretty hot so far......your flow is real nice on this and and your pressense and delivery are cool...jay-z talked for too long in my opinion...but mehh its cool......this is a pretty good song i'd def. bump fam....you gotta real deep voice for how small you look....but its all good..... hmmm i'm likin this man....your flow is realy nice keep this coming 9.5/10
can you rtf on this:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222351 feed used 2/20 "HOP ON In" Last edited by will appear : 02-21-06 at 02:15 PM. |
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02-18-06, 08:09 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
yea, fasho i got you on the return.
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02-19-06, 05:59 AM
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Champion
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listenin, liking how u put Jayz at the begining, gives a nice intro, beat is nice, like how the drums come in on the pianos, youre flow is hot, real dope, I think you gotta deliver this better, it seems a hyped beat, but youre goin laid back, but it works im feelin u, hook has a good theme to it however A................R.t.i.s.........t....too many spaces, however lyrics are crazy and youre flow is sick...emotion is good, and presence is dope...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...991#post2662991 ^^^ can you rtf feed used 2/19 "Chill Wit' Me"
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