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Old 09-03-06, 02:11 AM   #1
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Post lyrical hustla

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lyrical hustla

-verse1-

shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin,
n neva shit in da same pot i piss in,
the trigger of thought is itchin,2 squeeze the ink 2 make an impression,
im here 2 teach these new kids a lesson,neva rely on a chance u second guessin,
if u make it out these cold streets take it as a blessin,
cuz fuckin wit crack heads jus mean u need da rite contraception,
so whether it b a knife,tek,or an all black smith & wesson,
watch ya back n ta neva leave home w/o weapons of destruction,
king of body stretchin,da type 2 practice wut he preachin,
reachin for dat promise 2 live 4 reason,but niggaz make me look 4 a reason,
2 leave a carcuss barely breathin,leavin w/o a trace of breachin's,
hop back in da ride n all they heard were da wheels burnin n screchin//

-hook-

wutchu want whoodie cuz i got wut u need,
whether it b coke,dope,g,or weed,
if u lookin 4 dat bomb shortie holla at me,
cuz im a lyrical hustla servin flow wit a evil seed,
tainted by a hustlaz ambitionz & gangstaz dreams

-verse2-

u could hate it or love it,but 1 hit from my crack,u gonna keep comin back cuz u need it,im here 2 feed ur addiction now feed it,
feel da weed hits,when my vocals rock da drum kits,if u hatin u worse then a dumb bitch,cuz i aint hustlin 4 nuttin nigga i got dreams
of infinite chips,new whip everyday new chick,cuz im lookin 4 dat everyday new shit,wit each word i spit,its an automatic street hit,
n 2 da bitch niggaz i get'em done click clacked quick,the chopper is sick,jump off my dick u punk bitch,where im from niggaz move slick,
"anotha body found in da gutta"is all ya hear when da record skip,but dats how da waterfalls like tlc's classic,i kno it hurts but this kid a bastard,
the art of war ive mastered,plastered wit weed n beer,i smell da aroma of fear,when hataz pressence is near,n i aint gonna drop no tear,
when i cock this here,i jus wanna make things clear//its dat dirty jersey,u heard me,i curb g's,disturbed please,hataz deserve shots 2 they knees,
i cut down sized mc's,put ya soul 2 ease,n leave jus enough breath 4 ya ghost 2 breathe,dat smell is peppa spray n smoke from trees,
2 intensify effect when ya body weez,jeez u muthafuckaz so touchy,sit down u kno u cant touch me,leave u internally bleed,hi di ho like krayzie
bone,when i rock the scene,im in it 2 win i fiend da cream,cash rule everything about me,n not 1 of u muthafuckaz gonna stop me,im cocky,
make u think my gun's latin the way it gets papi(poppy*)

-pre hook-

dat im a lyrical hustla,hustla,hustla,
death when da spark touchin ya,touchin ya
but im not 1 4 braggin bout bein a gangsta,
jus watch out when i shoulder lean wanksta

-hook-

-verse3-

u heard dat nigga cash rule everything about me nigga,im cocky,make u think my gun's latin da way it gets papi nigga,
im down 2 take a chance its yatzee nigga,im raspy,but classy nigga,so when a broad walk past me,well they neva past me,
so i guess u can call me flosy nigga,i aint kelis but im bosey nigga//expelled 2 writin rhymes,instigatin a crime,cuz i feel da pressure,
of leavin ya body lumped against ya dresser's implied,dats why i smoke trees,to let the breeze,carry ya screams,2 a new murda scene,
damn rite i like the attention cuz im givin da game sumtin its much deprived,the spirit of wisdom my lyrics analyze,this rap shit 2 normalize,
cuz 2 many niggaz wanna ride,but run inside once da bullets fly,every time i rip da mic i feel alive,so i kno inside,ima b puttin it down like
this til da day i die//who u kno serve flow,wit such a spirted glow,use depression as a means 2 grow,cuz when i get on the mic ya
impression's froze,like damn i didnt kno so much ice made ya cold,but i do kno when i aim this chopper ya face'll fold//just neva forget me,
cuz 1 day ill go down wit history,but til then gotta keep my misery company,til 1 of u muthafuckas stop me,let the hook come in
and kill da memory//

-pre hook-

-hook-

Last edited by allikwarawkilla : 09-23-06 at 04:06 AM. Reason: finish text so i can start audio
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Old 09-03-06, 02:39 AM   #2
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2 links within 12 hours or this will be closed.

Last edited by Peace : 09-03-06 at 03:10 AM.
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Old 09-03-06, 09:27 AM   #3
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207341

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234372

there ya go peace my two links now show me sum feed people holla back 1
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Old 09-03-06, 07:34 PM   #4
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ayt u got ur links now sum1 view welllet me illtierate dat if u a bitch ass hata who gonnado nuttin but b childish n talk shit then dotn bother wastin my threads time or space holla uppin
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Old 09-04-06, 12:37 AM   #5
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oh thats whats popping,i see you trying to keep it hood...i was feeling it
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Old 09-04-06, 12:51 AM   #6
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good look homie sum1 dat appreciates real shit holla back homie uppin this piece dont sleep rv!
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Old 09-04-06, 11:10 AM   #7
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ayt people ive seen 17 people other than the 5 dat replied or w/e yet wut ya'll can read but cant leave a message get on ya'll j-o-b's on here dats wut were supposed 2 do peep each others stuff tell each other wut we did or didnt do wrong n move on c'mon people complainin rv dyin well man/woman up n quit bein ignorant fucks 2 sum of u who cant deny ur own ignorance on here to those who keep it music dont lose that focus uppin this dont sleep....
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Old 09-04-06, 10:20 PM   #8
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god damn rv u really r gettin dead asfuckcomin peeps ive replied 2 a couple muthafuckas since droppin this om quit sleepin quitactin like u aint got 15-20 minutes 2 read da shit n drop a line c'mon wake the fuck up rv
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Old 09-04-06, 10:47 PM   #9
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are you brainless?

leave feed on others open mics with your link and they will return the favour. but seen as your a fucking retard i cant see anyone giving two fucks about your open mic.
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Old 09-04-06, 11:11 PM   #10
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fuck u peace ive been leavin feed on different peoples shit n i do got links 1 2 this om n 1 2 my open battle so fuckin bite me either tell me wut u think w/o bein anass or dont waste my threads space mod or not i abide by darules so why dont uget ur hatinbastards 2doda same
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Old 09-05-06, 06:14 AM   #11
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hey look man this was all right you talked gutter bu tyour form is now really gutter too many big words up in here but still an all right piece i enjoyed it

HEY PEACE why did you leave poetic scriptures to come over here and make stupid poetry loving mistakes come on man you need to be briefed as a moderater but i see i did teach you something you gave him twelve hours to respond but hell man some people work 8 hours or ten hours give the people 24 hours to respond
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Old 09-06-06, 07:44 AM   #12
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im not hatin on the feed but first peeps say 2 plain up vocab now ya sayin de-vocab? im lost lol thanx 4 da feed though homie uppin dont sleep
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Old 09-13-06, 08:01 AM   #13
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In this verse over played vocab is this!
shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin
BTW Fams that don't rhyme

But I personal don't class people using long rhyming words as vocab,
my definition of vocab is the use of unsual words.

I dream of tranquillity to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity


Is that overplaying vocab ? I don't think so.

We need to work on your structure, you stretch your bars u need to write
them,. then get rid of the deadwood refine the bar.

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Old 09-16-06, 10:52 PM   #14
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ayt kool homie question is how do i kno wut line or word to leave or take out?
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Old 09-18-06, 03:25 AM   #15
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this joint was ight, but you ya need to step up ya verse by makin it more interesting,.
you got a nice flow, and the rhymes were on point, all im sayin is maybe a couple punches in there or work on the chorus, but other than that you were holdin it down.
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