who wnats ot tag team bash some noobs cuz im bored???
LI???

shabba???

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chase do you really need help to noob bash??......lol

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left...2 many herbs

Hmmmm, I think I might post something in here

Oh know this is really wack, for you and for me, lol I dropped hella weak and payed the price, but cuz of this ima be really angry wit this battle and k.o Red Bull wit a hot verse (wich will be in here when I finish) so just peep this for now, it was vs. Fiya Spitter

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//

Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire//
Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire//

I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//

Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame//
I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name//

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//
Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?...

Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire//
Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire//
Decent...ur getting the concept...just needs a better delivery...so work on that...

I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//
looool NOOOOOO...

Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame//
I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name//
Very, very, very stretched...its really a boring punch...=\

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

hmm that shits hard ya ill need to do it in time im so actice it will be done soon anyone wanna check out my openmic and give feedback on it and then tell me what needs fixing? speicialy L.I

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//
Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?...
Cuz a bitch is a female dog, they get left in the rain, rain puts out fire

I think thats what he meant

'I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//'
rofl...duke is dope.

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k heres a song with a punchline in it a punchline basically im gonna make one with eyr name its only simple to do it but it dont meen anything jsut for a example here it is:
this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
^^^thats weak but is it a punchline? i can do better

k heres some wordplay:
i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
^^^that wordplay? i kno its weak but w/e is it?

^^^that was from the diabolic thingy hes tryin to elavate me but sense yer better i wanna she what i get for this???

this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
Telling them shut up doesnt deliver a punch...say sumtin witty..

i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
No...i dont see the wordplay...u attepmted a meta...a weak one...keep practicing and read the vets battles and try to imitate their syles...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

^alright thanks and ya i get the punches now and im starting to leanr wordplay triple N is teaching me in my crew hes good with punches but i wanna learn wordplay but i will soon ya ill take eyr advice and read other vets battles but here ill try another punchline:

relizing that ruff tuff thug is hella weak with everything he says and dos...
taken him and throwing him into the back of a garbadge truck would be done with ease/
^^^^^^dos that work for a punch and i kno it dosent rhyme but dos it work for a punchline? i can make it rhyme but i dont realy got to much time

No..its just saying ur gonna do sumtin...

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Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

I want Empire to help me elavate aight L.I