yall know that noone comes close to my flow

yall may got better lines on me, but yall know u cant compete with my style

aight, this was made with 2 ppl in mind West, and other one i cant mention....

enjoy [p.s. it starts a lil slow, please read it all]
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Expressin Emotion to a Certain Somebody

I.......

hate what u stand-fo'. u used to be my right hand man doe
I love when i lie to you, but now i grind u like sand-stone

I love wearin this mask where you think im ur boy
"were u just talkin bout me?" "quit bein so paranoid"

take a steroid so u can flex to my pythons
fights on, so you best sleep with the lights on

i got my sights locked on, to blow ur brain-out
refrain-now, stay-down, called then sprayed-out

bring pain-BLAOW when these slugs bang-out
sustain-doubt, but dont say i lost when shells slang-out

ur not my mayne-now, on my list of shame-now
played-out, like cards when u get layed-down pal *POW*

who got slayed-now life taken-POW whos fakin-now
with ur legs breakin-pal when the 12 gauge sprays-ya down

at the bottom of a lake-pal im ok-now i can maintain-now
in a grave-now, the friendship we once had cant stay-now




Expressin Emotion its flowin from broken senses
Barrel smokin cuz u chokin because of this

Freestylin, im not even stoppin to think
i hate the fact we share the same air we breathe

i hope u sleep and ur heart stops fuckin pumpin
now dont u wish u didnt make sumthin outta nuthin

4-10's thumpin when we got .45 shells in-um
we sent-um, u need a hand i lent-um

u sent me bars and i bent-um
victims, u been-one, i been their for u and den-sum

u cant win-um, hearts on ur sleave cuz i pinned-um
u been-dum u wanted sum i even lent u my big-gun

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aight, that was key styled, and i ran out of werds

i didnt look up from the key board but like 2ce in 5 minutes

so theres prolly some spelling errors....

I was def. digging this
Gangsta shit right here
8/10

thanx dog, i just in the mood to write u know, i diggin the pic, dude sittin there with 2 desert eagles aimed, thats the shit

Godd stuff,Who u talkin bout in tha ryhme though ? Got me intreaged.

Peace

i said u were one of them

but theres another who contributed more.......

u only got involved in a lil itty bit of it

who the other guy
give us a clue

naw dog, cant do all that, chances are u dunno him anyway lol

but it is good huh?

shit, im just experimenting with flow, usaly id be more violent or soft, but im just tryna go till i run out of werds lately

if u want tips on how to write like this


listen to Twista or Tech N9ne, and str8 creative wit it, listen to Krayzie Bone solo songs..... or Bizzy Bone

this was nice favourite bit in da middle...

I love wearin this mask where you think im ur boy
"were u just talkin bout me?" "quit bein so paranoid"

take a steroid so u can flex to my pythons
fights on, so you best sleep with the lights on

i got my sights locked on, to blow ur brain-out
refrain-now, stay-down, called then sprayed-out

bring pain-BLAOW when these slugs bang-out
sustain-doubt, but dont say i lost when shells slang-out

just rolled off da tongue easy...nice stuff

yea, best part is, i just wrote i didnt really have to stop, i did once cuz i didnt like

then strangle ur mom wit ur blood stand-towel

^^ wack, like i said i just keyed it...

anyway, thanx for the feedback

wait, u thought that i wass gunna let this fall? hahahahaha hell no

yo nice shit man, i was feelin it and it was tight dawg, keep dat shit up................................................ .......

thanx yall

im just experamentin
uppin

this was mad ill, i liked the flow(duhhh it is the part of the title) so thats already at the top,
i was feelin the lines and everything was mad hott, 9/10
still missing some element to it but still a hot piece. can you check out my new open mic-The Skitzo:me vs. me

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!