i'ma bout to send anotha fucka to the slaughta/
with words that'll shred right through you/
your a cattle bout to be sacrificed before the new world order/
i'm lyrically blessed on the mic/
you a wannabe MC but you cant even rhyme/
you used to taking the walk of shame/
your dreams have been smashed/
aint no way you can make it in this game/
gunfamgeneral is the general of gay porn/
your flow is weaker then that of sean combs/
go take your shots at dagreatest/
couldnt penetrate my chest/
and i aint even wearing a bulletproof vest/
you a nigga that dont like pussy/
cant get that shit so you prefere riding ponies/
your family better get used to seeing a dead bodies/
and better change their names for their safety/
cos after i'm done with you/
aint no one be left to give a testimony/
i crumble regular MC's like crumbling match sticks/
on the mic/
you dont stand a chance you'll get your ass kicked/
with something like a machete/
i write rhymes to kill/
aint no way you can beat me/
with this rhyme i'm schooling you in the art of self defence/
you gonna need my advice with every chance you get/
you cant even read or write/
nigga you need to learn the alphabet/
so in every match you get/
nigga you better walk away/
otherwise your mama gotta get used to saying "My son died today"

Ok This Nigga Think He Got/
Its Too Bad That When I Write Rhymes In Pen/
I Got Mo' Murder In My Inc Than Irv Gotti/
Dog U R A Fag And U Kno It If There Was A Dick On Your Dinner Plate/
U Would Prolly Blow It/
Im The King Of Killeen Which Is My City/
U Is A Fake Nigga And Its Time U Get Exposed Like Janet's Titty/
See Battlin Me 4 U Was Not Cleva/
I Aint Trill Vill But Bitch Nigga U Could Neva Eva Get On My Leva

uppin 4 votes............................................. ..................

Somebody Pls Vote 4 This Shit So I Can Get My 1st Win

WTF was that bullshit,

Dude dagreatest, you say this "you a wannabe MC but you cant even rhyme/"

BUT YOUR SHIZ DIDNT RHYME!!!

and the only line I thought was any good was this one

nigga you better walk away/
otherwise your mama gotta get used to saying "My son died today"

GUNFAMGENERAL254 , your verse was like quarter of the size of dagreatest, but I thought his sucked so I think your last 4 lines were better than his whole verse, quality is more important than quanity, and at least your shiz rhymed lol,

Vote - GUNFAMGENERAL254

yo da greatest shit succed , da shit didnt rhyme , gun yo shit was straight
i think gun won

learn to rhyme. its easy to do if u try. start simple like ball and fall, or cat and bat. u suck

^^^^funny..now to buzi

um dude RHYMING IS FUNDAMENTAL!!!!...ur shit sucked..gun fam won easily..his last lines wurr good....he cudda won by jus rhyming...llmao

THAT WAS THE GAYIEST BATTLE EVER ON THE FACE OF THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you a wannabe MC but you cant even rhyme/
YOUR HELLA WACK

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gun won because his shit actualy worked and had flow, plus he was feeling it

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