20 lines...freestyle...let it rip

ready boy?or are you a broken toy?charge up your batteries,prepare for the tragedy. now i dont even know shit about you double c,except that your from england being ran by the communist queen, dressin in drag ,surfin the web , soon this site will be dead, only to you ,cuz emirk ficked up your head,picked up the bent,broken whats left of you,body parts next to you,goats wont have sex with you,english bartholomew,straight up retarded dude, give it all up like a robbery dropped on you, changin the subject now is easy..your rimes are all cheesy,chesterfield wannabe rappin with your lyrics all greassy

emirk the wacktastic deformed spastic, but he still gets his head,
seein as he shares a bed with his mum,
incestual relationship since his dad became a fag, and raped his bum,
i'll rip you a new pussyhole, now you a special type of herm
two pussyholes and one dick, you fucked long term,
you wont bring nothining i aint seen,
you a newb but already, a has been,
why the fuck you try n step to c,
when every time you spit, you dribblin cum n wee,
you think your hot wit 3 posts,but when it comes to it you aint even close,
the minute this drops ,they all know your through,
this should be closed, it an embarrassment to you,
just like when you popped out your mums fallopian tubes,
your mum wanted to give you away,
but your pedo dad pesuaded her to let you stay,
my punch heavy duty, knock you down,
we wouldnt hear yours even if you shout,
this the biggest mistake, you ever made,
like bill clinton acceptin them brains,
emirk by name, gettin merked by nature,n im the fuckin storm that gena desolate ya,

Flow - Emerik's structure was better so flow better on his half

Personals - double C had alot more and were alot better

Vocab - Both had pretty good vocab

Originality - Double C was more orginal but overall alright verses

Winner - my vote goes 2 Double C

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DEATH ROW

double c won this cause his punches were creative, had better flow,

Emirk the Jerk, it rhymed but the punches didnt hit, and dont type your verse in one continuous sentence cause its hard to read that way, and it makes people not wanna read it, but I can see you gettin better, just keep battle'n.

My Vote Goes To Double C For Much Better Punchlines, This Punchline By Emirk The Jerk Was Terrible - "ready boy?or are you a broken toy?"

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

Emirk-- ur flow sucks, i couldnt read that, try change ur pattern, to make it easier to read, ur punches nice and personal, but it all was too weak for me
4/10

Double c-- u said it is an easy win, i dont agree, u had more punches and better flow
but im sure if Emirk, shapes up on his flow, u would lose
6/10

Vote: Double c(hope we can see better punches next time)

Yo could u pls give me some decent votes on these battles
LK63 VS DavioSenBoo
LK63 VS Dagreatest
LK63 VS Godfather(2)
Guyver4mk vs lk63

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