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Old 12-14-05, 02:56 PM   #1
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1 Letter Away- Doc Trin Ft. Vibe

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Chea..... Vibe on the 1st verse and chorus, I got second verse

left feed on B.Daniels Its gonna be alright, And WIlla Peers Musical Lust

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Old 12-14-05, 03:49 PM   #2
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Old 12-14-05, 05:20 PM   #3
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niggas allways sleep no matter what site peoples shit is on. FEDD FUCKAs
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Old 12-14-05, 08:13 PM   #4
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im feelin the beat

1st person ugh
@ your flow
its weird, all your words are kind of slowed
and its very choppy

2nd person
A SHITLOAD better, flow is much better and rides the beat much better. the chorus is AIIgh, not horrible, but not great
wow man, that Vibe guy sucked, but Doc trin you came aiigh on the track
you mos def outshined Vibe
I would like to hear some solo shit from you

anyway
overall, a below average track, the 1st guy was just horrible, lol
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 12-14-05, 08:43 PM   #5
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LOLzzzzz!!!!!!roxorZZZ thanks for the feed, and ive been droppin stuf... im just the unknown cat...
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Old 12-14-05, 08:55 PM   #6
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uh the beat is iight, but still its not my type of song. The way yall flowin to this is kinda awkward it sounds like yall off beat, but then it sounds like yall on beat. Doc ya verse was coo, your flow was coo lyrics were better and shit, only problem I got is ya voice it sounds funny lol

Can you leave some feedback and RTF please thanks
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Old 12-14-05, 09:35 PM   #7
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ok thanks for feeed. im 15
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Old 12-15-05, 05:06 AM   #8
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RTF On my "ai diss track" son
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wtf kinda feed was that
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Old 12-15-05, 08:23 PM   #12
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fucking faggots.
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it says its maintenance i cant get on it
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fucking myspace.....
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