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01-27-05, 08:44 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 1502 6D57
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05-11-05, 10:18 PM
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IP: 15FF E70F
haha damn been a long as time.. uppppppppppiiiiinnnnn
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05-11-05, 10:49 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
This was a pretty good read..
i as feeling it , your flow and vocab was okay not the best but it was good , emotions and feeling was good , felt that you could have used more deep wording , and make more imagery for the reader, so he can visulize what is happening , in your peice.. Overall it was pretty good.. and i help it was an okay read , alittle long but it was worth it , good drop keep it up
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