I read the whole thing about tips on how to be better and I just had My first battle and I am getting destroyed, which means I must suck. I need help please

this is the battle:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67467

read the tuturiols and just practice

if you give an admin. or a mod head that will help ya record...lol...j/k...damn I'm high

You Were Ripped, Lyrically!

O.k, Don't Keep Using ya To make Lines Rhymes, It's O.k For One Or Two Buts Thast It!

Read The Tutorials, They'll Help You Alot..Or Contact Me, Or A Vet To Help You Out!

aight man what you gotta do is shorten ur lines....people dont wanna read all that stuff.......also make sure u end a bar with a rhyme cuz otherwhise ur whole line just got fucked......another thing you should do is get better with ur vocab...use some harder words.....and keep a scheme to ur flow.....

Aight Basic Shit Ya Gotta Start From...
Structure
Flow
Punches
Rhyming Bars

Thats All The Basic Shit Ya Gotta Start From...Once You Get The Hang Of That Add More Complexity And Good Usage Of Vocab...Dont Just Put A Big Word In There Because It Looks Good...Its Gotta Mean Something...If Ya Read The Tutorials And Still Need Help...I Suggest That Every Battle You Have And Still Think You 'Suck'...Post Your Shit Down Here And We Will Try To Help Ya...

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