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Old 03-26-07, 01:46 PM   #1
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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oK BEAT IS COOL ALOT OF PEOPLE HAVE USED IT
yOU SOUND LIKE YOUR STRUGGELING FOR AIR OR SOMETHING
emotion is ok could be upped a little
flow is pretty good but could improve a bit
You sound like your talking in some parts you really go off beat. Try and hti the snares

Decent track
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