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02-03-09, 11:44 AM
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Rottweiler
IP: D088 20AB
Rottweiler
I have a dog inside of me, A Rottweiler I think. He's getting older And stronger And wants off his chain. But I can't set him free, At least where he wants. I put him in there myself Thinking it would be fine, But I was wrong. I wasn't misled Or unconscious, Nor intoxicated So I'd have an excuse. I put him in there myself, I wasn't thinking of you. |
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02-03-09, 02:18 PM
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IP: B158 C755
pretty dope, short and basic but the message is clear. Good use of poetics. Well wrote.
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When I be selling grams I’m slinging bombs like Uncle Sam Myspace It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal... But it's treason when you turn your back on your people. |
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02-05-09, 10:59 PM
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IP: 7C55 5446
this was sick my fellow TE friend.
loved the motio nand it was short and sweet my dude. props on this
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05-08-09, 04:08 AM
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IP: 5985 21AD
2 links or im going to have to close this.
and for the feeders, try and leave better feed. Atleast 3-5 sentances
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