my first poem, from 05, good thing i still have it on my wordpad, so though i'll put it here... note im not good with this but when i made it, it was all just in my mind/heart and the vocab wasnt here, nor wording so i know..... but please read and let me know what ya think..

~Personal Issues In Love~
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~Lately I Been Stressed To The Point,,That I Cried & Cried Knowin That Wont Help~
~I Thought This Was A Dream But It Wasnt,,Cuz We Just Kept Blaming Are Selves~
~All The Memories We Both Shared.. In The Pass Seems No More~
~I'm Scared.. Cuz I Know It's Over & A Broken Heart Of Mine Is Sore~
~I Kept Hitin The Wall, The Bag.. Anything In Sight Cuz I Just Hated My Life~
~Everything Seemed Bad..The Girl I Fell In Love With Wasnt On My Side~
~So Much Pain.. I Felt I Should Just Let It Go,, But How? If I Want Her Back~
~I Cant Forget Ur Name..I Try Blockin You,, Every Time I Write My Raps~
~But I Cant, & Remember That One Day I Punched The Side Of My Head~
~I Was Just Out Of It,, I Felt This Was It & I Told U I Rather Just Be Dead~
~Cuz U Slaped My Face...& U Never Hit Me Before So Right Then My Heart Was Crushed~
~2 Different Raist..But It Wasnt That It Was The Anger That Emotionly Was The Bad Touch~
~I Still Love U Just Like U Told Me..See U Guys That Are Readin Dont Know The Whole Story~

~I Deserve U Hitin Me Cuz I Been An Asshole Which I Really Dont Know Why I Act Like That~
~See I Lossed Her Now I Learned From My Mistakes But Still Wonder If I Can Have Her Back~
~& I Was The Boy That Had Everythin In My Hands.. But Was To Dumb To Think Right~
~& I Dont Care If U Ever Get With Another Man.. Cuz I'll Always Take Care Of U Till I DIE~..

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