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Old 06-28-09, 09:46 AM   #1
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life poem

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spit lyrics cause deverstation with my creation
beat cocks down with rhymes with no hesertation
give people insperation der aint noboy doper
left u without a rope yer, i ant no friggin joker
tired of fuck heads, filling my head up
wot can i say i guess i feel just fed up
with life,, cuz sometimes it dont look right
or shine bright and u feel lost out of sight
give urself another chance, you can make it
if you have negetive thoughts ur gonna do down the drain kid
i went through pain that drove me insane
everyday rained, not in clouds but in my brain
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Old 07-11-09, 01:43 PM   #2
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what up technique. For the most part, this piece was on point. The flow was definitely there. Piece seemed kinda short, but its was descent none the less...
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