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Old 04-26-04, 09:53 AM   #1
DirtBoy69
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hydroponic_buzz vs. kryogenix

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battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
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no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
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Old 04-26-04, 01:32 PM   #2
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checkin' in
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Old 04-28-04, 03:59 PM   #3
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Old 04-28-04, 04:51 PM   #4
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Im constantly rippin kids..it's a gift..no duh you stupid bitch!
And Hydro wants me to Eat Him..just so he can come out on my Shit List!
This cat's wack..how do I know?..because his skill's showing
I mean..be fa'real!..what can a "Buzz" do?..besides be annoying?
Runnin this failed rapper over, in this battle you cant lag a bit!
If post count showed skill..yours against mines will be the most accurate
You the type of emcee to rap about guns...not knowin that I got 10!
And the 'Only thing worse than a wack rapper, is a wack rapper from Scotland!
Leavin' this hoe retreatin in battle..got him scared ready to re-nig
Cause he know..I'll put a burner to his dome..kind of like the shit in yo sig!
You peice of shit, Assclown!, I'll leave you stomped in the dirt..
HOLD ON !! WAIT A FUCKING MINUTE!!! SCOTLAND??!!!! ISN'T THAT THE PLACE WHERE ALL THE GUYS WEAR SKIRTS???!!!
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Old 04-29-04, 10:33 AM   #5
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you called cryogenic cos you're rhymes are cold/
my flows are hot they flick-er an' burn a hole/
they melt through you're rhymes, so i've been told/
i let off so much heat, that you're on the mic' frozen/
i know before you battle, you're rhymes already chosen/
you write pre-emptive flows, you got no punches only posin'/
you made a "smashin" job of you're self portrait avatar/
you betta' be cashin' yo' face in, or you'll soon be seein' stars/
every battle is gonna get taken, they'll rip you til yo' scarred/
you need put in a cryogenic chamber, leave rap alone/
remain aware and beware, cos we want you to go home, please just go!/
you couldn't even drop vows at you're weddin', that's why it's postponed/
i toke weed an'get a buzz, now i'm buzzin' around you with the shit i bring/
you know i'm the best their was, because, when i swing a punch it stings/
i'll run rings as i spring on you, the punch swingin' king, feel ma' highland fling/
i'm gonna hire a lifeguard to pull yo' kids out the gene pool/
let yo' kids climb back in the hole anythin' else would be cruel/
you may be kryogenix, but now you won't feel cool/
cos i got the fuel to rule, so get back to rhyme school... fool/
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Old 04-29-04, 11:02 AM   #6
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sick battle but im gonna have to give this battle to kryo
he had overall better flow and structure and i was feelin his verse more

both y'all came wit solid punches and hydro u got sum mad skillz but kryo showed his experience. his punches were a little harder and his connection was better but still gud performance from both.
gud use of vocabs and originality in both spits and kryo that was a fuckin sick finisher playa, nuff respect 2 both playas!!

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Old 04-29-04, 12:39 PM   #7
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First of all, rhymin an odd number of lines just ruins the flow. You can't expect people to read this as if it were a real verse. Kryo came with some OK punches but his flow was definately there. But I don't like Kryo so I might just vote against him....
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Old 04-29-04, 02:52 PM   #8
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all right Kryo came out hitten hard and he won it with his closer
not the best that ive seen but it was perrty good so my vote

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Old 04-29-04, 03:14 PM   #9
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No contest... kryo had this one for sure despite the fact that the closer was annoying. Buzz... your punches were weak and your 1-ups were weaker... you buzz so you sting so you the greatest... weak. Elevate.
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Old 04-29-04, 04:21 PM   #10
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breakdown...
kinda one sided but i'll show you it anyways

Im constantly rippin kids..it's a gift..no duh you stupid bitch!
And Hydro wants me to Eat Him..just so he can come out on my Shit List!
6.5
This cat's wack..how do I know?..because his skill's showing
I mean..be fa'real!..what can a "Buzz" do?..besides be annoying?
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Runnin this failed rapper over, in this battle you cant lag a bit!
If post count showed skill..yours against mines will be the most accurate
9
You the type of emcee to rap about guns...not knowin that I got 10!
And the 'Only thing worse than a wack rapper, is a wack rapper from Scotland!
8.5
Leavin' this hoe retreatin in battle..got him scared ready to re-nig
Cause he know..I'll put a burner to his dome..kind of like the shit in yo sig!
7.5
You peice of shit, Assclown!, I'll leave you stomped in the dirt..
HOLD ON !! WAIT A FUCKING MINUTE!!! SCOTLAND??!!!! ISN'T THAT THE PLACE WHERE ALL THE GUYS WEAR SKIRTS???!!!
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MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

v- kryogenix...ididn't like buzz's shit...it was pretty elementary...
 
Old 04-29-04, 07:17 PM   #11
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Damn..

Kyrogenix Mad Hot Rymes Man...I Like Da Style and Your Punches Were Hard Hitting. Just Lacked Da Metaphors and Multis, But Thats Your Personal Style (Just LIke MINE SO DON"T SAY SHIT) LMAO....Neways..Hydroponic Just Elevate Man..Stay Dope!

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Old 05-02-04, 03:46 PM   #12
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breakdown for kryogenix:

flow:good right till the end when you get that long as line 7/10

volcab:alright use kinda basic though 6/10

punches: nothing too direct and alot of played ideas your best line,"HOLD ON !! WAIT A FUCKING MINUTE!!! SCOTLAND??!!!! ISN'T THAT THE PLACE WHERE ALL THE GUYS WEAR SKIRTS???!!!" no flow really but good closer 6/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for hydroponic_buzz:

flow:no off spots good job 7/10

volcabretty basic try harder next week 6/10

punches:nothing really too direct some alright open ended disses but 5/10

overall:18/30

vote--kryogenix
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Old 05-03-04, 01:07 AM   #13
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^^its funny that the worst punch I prolly ever threw in my life is everyone's favorite
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Old 05-03-04, 09:41 AM   #14
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cause it was so basic everyone got it^^^ anyway you win 7 or 8 nothing

7-0 kyrogenix wins
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