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A story about a 23 year old man .. Still living at home with his mom .. Single .. Afraid to talk to women .. Low self esteem .. Still a virgin .. Witness his life fall completely downhill in a month ..

The man home .. In his bedroom .. Mom's in the kitchen cooking dinner .. He starts sweating .. He has the need for .. Something ..

Started To Feel The Tension Mount, And My Body Temperature Rise..
Me With A Handful Of Lube, And All The Supermodels To Fantasize..
I Started To Rub Slowly, Making Sure Every Aspect Was Touched..
Made Sure Every Thing Was Perfect, Cuz Perfection Can’t Be Rushed..
My Face Felt Flushed, As I Stared At This Beauty Who Looked Back..
It’s A Known Fact Of This Women’s Beauty, So I Checked The Tack..
It Was Intact, So I Went Back To My Bed And Just Laid There Staring..
Then I Heard A Knock At The Door, So I Answered It Without Caring..
My Mother Walked In, And Had A Look Of Sheer Horror Of Her Face..
Anger Was Not The Case, She Just Asked, “Who Cleaned This Place”..
You Should Of Seen My Face, Because She Didn’t Even Notice At All..
The Nude Picture Of Naomi Campbell That Was Hanging On My Wall..

Two weeks later after being sentenced to 10 years in prison .. For a charge of statutary rape of a 13 year old girl ..

My pain stays in flames as I often forget my name
To that I lay blame on the days I've been shackled in chains
I battle the rain to hold back my tears that I've held back for years
No joy or cheer, Just me here with theses steel bars and chair
Missin' the smell of fresh air, and the breeze recieved when ur free
Now time passes with eae, and Im bare while I see scratcheson my knees ..
From prayer if you please, Cuz I won't fetch the fresh breath of death
Often I feel too cursed to be blessed, as I slept, crept in the depth ..
Stretched, left alon to fall cuz Im always standing too tall to call
Instead I stay enthralled about lashing my pain out on the prison cell walls ..

A month later after spending 3 weeks in jail .. Tired of bein' locked in a prison cell .. His demise begins ..

This Is The Day I Hold Nuthin Back
Can't Contain These Viscious Attacks
I Have No Choice But To Follow Through
These Feelings I Have, Are Because Of You
Your Actions And Remarks Sent Me Over The Top
Reassured Me My Life Was A Failing Flop
I Had Dreams And So Many Aspirations
Wanted To Fulfill, But Stuck In This Situation
Everyday I Lived A Life Of Terror
How Was This, Never An Error?
You Instilled Fear In My Nerves, My Heart Went Racing
Eyes Are The Window Of This Beings Soul
How Could You Not See, That Gaping Hole
I Told You To Stop, You Didn't Listen
I'ma Great Kid, You Don't Know What Your Missin'
Today Will Be Your Last, To Pull Out My Hair
I'm Goin Home To Say A Final Prayer
I Turn To The Middle, I've Had It All
Pull The Trigger, Stains On The Wall

The End

Great work...nothing bad I can say about this...*Going to nominate this for OM of the month*

Lots of suicide pieces around here but this incorporated a new twist, i liked that. good storytelling and whatnot, the flow was smooth and enjoyed the wordplay much. Good job,..

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A story about a 23 year old man .. Still living at home with his mom .. Single .. Afraid to talk to women .. Low self esteem .. Still a virgin .. Witness his life fall completely downhill in a month .. .. very creative.. all came strong , very good concept!! damn very very nice!! this was dope, .. good vocab, flow & the deepness!, for real i enjoyed this very much , Good Job! =) Props.

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yeH yall get props on this shit..it was dope..not many downs to it...but I know what the stains on the wall was..my nut stains..hahaha...good peice..though..everything was on point..

check out my shit..was that your aim..me featuring Kryogenix..

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