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Old 02-14-04, 02:01 PM   #1
Khôi NguJin
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Grind them away, grind them away..
Settle it down, set it all straight
Please help me, save me, I promise to pray
For my souls sake, each honest mistake -
That I made, forsaken, I`ll stay on cup
..Ok? Seems fair enough
My pocket is airing out....the maid of luck..
I said that through the letters..
I kept from gettin' wet up
Exhibited new being, you my heaven`s weather
My nautical soul, cold? Hell no..
Even as treacherous frostbite nipped on my toe
..So long behold the liveliness of your breath
Kept on the ends of my fingertips
I elect to prevent death and let -
Wind dwindle on in so our distance is met
There and then as this pen is jotting my love -
Inked with harmonious melodies..
Continued scratching the rough -
For the first time home remedies, that`s true
Just letting me realize that I can`t lose you..

All the flawless chapters of my life with you
Depicting the lines, as my heart expires quietly
Soon to be renewed by your sense`s entirety -
Righting this society to an ocean of loves endeavor
Never, NEVER will I fail to fancy your treasures
Forever to be with you a million miles apart
This numbing disorder of illness` willingness
To accept what I have and give back, MY art -
The gift to you because you gave me this..
..So please let me repay you, listen` in..
Grind away each moment enslaved..
Grind away the day`s of disgrace..
Please just erase the pressures n` pain..
Grind away the ache n` the strain..
Of everyday WE sustain, being awake...

..So forgive me and grind everything away..
Provide for me to be a simple `n plain fellow..
Leave the burdens behind, astray dreams on my pillow
..See, nothing`s colder than being caught in fire
To understand the entire truths portrayed, indeed..
As the youths just don`t understand the meaning..
...Of belief.

"Grinded..."
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Old 02-14-04, 03:05 PM   #2
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Dope piece here man .. I peeped this elsewhere and U know my thoughts on it .. dope piece man .. Keep writin .. One
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