Aight, thiz a lil cut me and my brother recorded a week or so ago, he juzt got outta prison so he gettin used 2 the whole recordin thang, feel me? ANywayz tell me what you think aight.appreciated....

I take first verse and the chorus, my brother the one wit the deeper voice....

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the beat is fukin ill....... crazy of the chain...... the flow is painful and meaningful felt your thug on this..... keep reppin that real shit.......

No doubt playa.....much appreciated.....we got a lot more comin too, so hit thoze up and I'll return the feed to any of yall.....Uppin right here

troublesome.......shits bangin

nice track....entertaining

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Thanx playa......no doubt, I gotta get at you,
we gonna lace some hot shit again.....
UPPIN

i kinda think the "army/general" gimmic is played out..beat is real slow..but has an epic sound..the vocals so far arent very enlightening..just another guy braggin about how tough he is(played out)..and the song plays on..still nothing very entertaining here..beat is still dope though..i think i've heard enough of this to know where its gunna end up..

all in all..i'm sure this song will appeal to other people..its just not my steez..though its not bad rap..its actually a well made track..its just not what i would jump to listen to and be able to enjoy..but good job on the music making..

pZ..

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listenin.. the beat is tight, but a lil too slow for me... ^^yeah.. the general/army shit is played.. flow was good... voice is koo.. delivery was tight.. this was good.. keep up the work..

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you did good even though the beat was very slow but I'm sure you could do better if you could take a beat that moves more........Your flow was tight , I could feel you men........ I especially like the part where you and eternal sing one after the other or when you make the backs for eternal.....nice shit.....
The only thing is the ending with the plane crap........
NICe shit seriously

peace
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gooood damn... u come in niiiice.... i thought it was hook, but it kept goin...o wait, i think it might-a been, no it wasn't... this is nice, lyrically, is dope... hook is good... 2nd verse, is nice, i like the delivery, nice ass style on it, multi's is nice in verses too... i do really like this hook too, it sounded better the 2nd time.. lolthis next guy is good too, deeper voice, flow is way different, but still nice, he got pac's flow... but a weird voice... your voices blend nice too...

overall this is a str8 track.. keep it up

but yo... return the favor... i tried a new style, some emotional shit for my girl..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113505

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aight playa....no doubt....thanx for the reply....ima hit urz up

anybody elze got anymore feedback??

wassup.........

yo sorry bout droppin mental mindstate........i didnt know u was at this site dawg..........my bad..........

but anywho..........listenin..........

opener is tight........beat is ill.........

Troublesome - good start to that verse........nice punchlines..........good word choice........good multis..........the topic and how u carried it out is tight as hell........that hook is ill to........good shit in this verse and in the hook........

Eternal - opener is tight.......punchlines are tight.........word choice is the best it could be.........multis r tight.........voice is different but fit well wit this song.........this verse was tight as fuck too......

overall - this shit was crazy........i was feelin everything in it..........good shit.......

keep droppin dawg.......

yo sorry again for droppin mental mindstate......i didnt know........

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ok .. listening.. beats nice.. you handle the slow beat well.. flow is nice.. delivery is good as well.. theres not a whole lot else to say.. its a general topic no pun intened.. nothing mindblowing.. but your carry it well.. and make it a solid track.. nice shit
peace

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