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Old 02-09-04, 09:47 PM   #16
Holmes Jr.
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Big Uppin............................................. .......
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Old 02-09-04, 10:17 PM   #17
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tactixx
OPENER:Holmes got no chance,there aint no stoppin me,
it's like i got hotels on every property in monopoly,
I own the board, the only way you win is copy me,
CLOSER
My shit's more intelligentual than a college thesis,
i shatter your rep......now you can pick up the pieces....


The opener was a kick ass meta. I liked how tactixx worked in triplets because it shows that he actually has to have two good lines in a row and then he hits with the final blow each time. The closer was pretty good as well. the one thing wrong was the tattoo line. it seemed out of place, but i liked the 'through a straw' line.

Holmes was much less complex and more generic that tactixx. he tried to use played gay stuff, and that's getting old.

Tactixx took this one. VOTE; TACTIXX

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Old 02-09-04, 10:49 PM   #18
Tactixx
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Uppin........
drop a link and i'll vote
 
Old 02-10-04, 12:00 AM   #19
Holmes Jr.
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That's a knockout innit? so i believe you won this..
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Old 02-10-04, 12:20 AM   #20
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...and then again, lookin back, i see we never said that we had ko's, so were still goin..uppin !!
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Old 02-10-04, 01:23 AM   #21
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Pretty even battle.I will have to go with Tactixx in this because he came better with his punches.I didnt really like Holmes shit at all.I felt he could have came better but didnt for what ever reason.Both of you need to work on multis and some type of internal rhyme scheme.Try to dig up a lil more information so you can do some personals.Personals are the keys to battles.they hit much much more harder than punches if used correctly.My advice to the both of you.Keep elevating.
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Old 02-10-04, 01:33 AM   #22
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Aight uppin for 1 more vote cos we know where it's headed...i real fucked up on this one.. ;\
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Old 02-10-04, 08:09 AM   #23
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Goin to work......uppin for the day......drop a link and ill hit u up
 
Old 02-10-04, 08:36 AM   #24
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Jr - underestimated ya opponent.. 3rd an 4th lines were ok.. the rest was rather played an could of been for anyone.. the punches werent connectin cos they were too general an they werent exactly ill concepts.. ya opener was confusin at best.. an that closer was horrible.. 'lyricism officer'?? plz dont do that again.. keep elevatin tho dawg..

Tactixx - i can tsay i liked the rhyming in three's structure.. but it was fresh an it kinda worked.. some nice concepts for the metas an u were pretty consistant.. harder hittin lines was down to a better vocab.. but that 'baboon' line was wack as u know!

VoTe = Tactixx

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